Comments : Torn Apart

  • 11 years ago

    by dora

    P0werful lines 0nce again. very well written.

  • 11 years ago

    by ~lost*and*lonely~

    WOW this poem has alot of meaning you put the words together just right keep it up cause i love reading poems written by you
    love,
    Carly

  • 11 years ago

    by Jacklyn

    "I'm torn apart,
    I was dead for a while.
    I asked for help,
    You faked a smile."

    love those line. great poem! your good at these types of poems, pleasure to read. keep up the great writing.

    ~Jacklyn

  • 11 years ago

    by BeautifulDisaster

    Aw, this is so sad but true, i can relate hun you're not alone in this, i love the last verse "How to go on, When you're all alone?" its a question i ask myself often, great work i loved this poem, take care,xxoo

  • Huni i really loved dis poem, dont worry gorguz, i no things r hard, i no how u feel, i just got into this big fight with my mum, i dun0o what 2 do, im feeling so alone right now, i guess i feel broken and nothing will change it....so i no that what im telling u probably wont make a big difference but huni i love u and i do care for u and u r mah bestie n i will always b der 4 ya....luv u huni

  • 11 years ago

    by Forsaken Redeemer

    Amazing, wonderful, unique, emotional, powerful.

    5 words which sum up this poem.

    gr8 work, keep goin.

    xXx

  • 11 years ago

    by Matters

    Wow.

    Anna, you truly rock! Your poems are so awesome, so emotional...

    It leaves me in awe everytime. Truly amazing, every bit of you.

    But the darkness... I expect to see more Butterfly Pony Rainbow poems from you!

    Well, fantastic.

    Matt

  • 11 years ago

    by Solace

    Yet another amazing write. I loved the way you ended the poem with a question. Hope you're ok.. take care xx:

    blaine -- *> : PainOfOne

  • 11 years ago

    by I.Dont.Own.Emotion.I.RENT.

    Oh my god. anna i think this is my favorite out of all your poems. its soooo good! jeez you nailed it! its just so perfect! i could feel the anger coming out of your words at the beginning and then the sadness pouring out at the end. like you have no idea how much i love this poem. and i'm sure almost everyone on this site can relate to it. wich is awsm. i luv ya anna never forget that! i'm always always here for you! lyl~lex

  • 11 years ago

    by Phantom

    -_-; Know the feeling.

  • LOVED IT!!

    5/5!!

  • 11 years ago

    by Xx-TotallyInnocent-xX

    That was so good

  • 11 years ago

    by *puddle ov blak tears*

    I can relli relate, but not so much ne more, relli relli hope u start feelin betta if dis iz bout how u feel!!

  • 11 years ago

    by melly xx

    I love this poem

  • 11 years ago

    by Bobbie Jo

    I liked this poem a real lot it really explains the inner side of a person like my self plus others but good job.

  • 11 years ago

    by ßeAuTiFuLlY~bRoKeи

    Wow i really felt the pain in that one...hang in there hun!

  • 11 years ago

    by Ashleigh M

    This poem made me actually visualize the pain and the bleeding and the black tears. keep up the good work.

    xxxKailanixxx

  • 11 years ago

    by Beautiful~*~Dragons~*~Fire

    Deep. I could feel the emotion.

  • 11 years ago

    by the middle

    Anna, hun... this is a really good poem-- BUT i HATE to hear you talk like this. i hate knowing you feel like this and that theres nothing i can do. is there anything i can do? i've tried... but i know i'm not of much help to you.
    so i'll just keep telling you i love you, and try n convince to to smile. it's when you look prettiest.
    love u. miss you.
    xoxoxo

  • 11 years ago

    by End Of Eternity

    Torn Apart-----This is the Mega Hit..

    great poem....lovely use of words...take care