Comments : Torn Apart

  • 12 years ago

    by dora

    P0werful lines 0nce again. very well written.

  • 12 years ago

    by ~lost*and*lonely~

    WOW this poem has alot of meaning you put the words together just right keep it up cause i love reading poems written by you

  • 12 years ago

    by Jacklyn

    "I'm torn apart,
    I was dead for a while.
    I asked for help,
    You faked a smile."

    love those line. great poem! your good at these types of poems, pleasure to read. keep up the great writing.


  • 12 years ago

    by BeautifulDisaster

    Aw, this is so sad but true, i can relate hun you're not alone in this, i love the last verse "How to go on, When you're all alone?" its a question i ask myself often, great work i loved this poem, take care,xxoo

  • Huni i really loved dis poem, dont worry gorguz, i no things r hard, i no how u feel, i just got into this big fight with my mum, i dun0o what 2 do, im feeling so alone right now, i guess i feel broken and nothing will change i no that what im telling u probably wont make a big difference but huni i love u and i do care for u and u r mah bestie n i will always b der 4 ya....luv u huni

  • 12 years ago

    by Forsaken Redeemer

    Amazing, wonderful, unique, emotional, powerful.

    5 words which sum up this poem.

    gr8 work, keep goin.


  • 12 years ago

    by Matters


    Anna, you truly rock! Your poems are so awesome, so emotional...

    It leaves me in awe everytime. Truly amazing, every bit of you.

    But the darkness... I expect to see more Butterfly Pony Rainbow poems from you!

    Well, fantastic.


  • 12 years ago

    by Solace

    Yet another amazing write. I loved the way you ended the poem with a question. Hope you're ok.. take care xx:

    blaine -- *> : PainOfOne

  • 12 years ago

    by I.Dont.Own.Emotion.I.RENT.

    Oh my god. anna i think this is my favorite out of all your poems. its soooo good! jeez you nailed it! its just so perfect! i could feel the anger coming out of your words at the beginning and then the sadness pouring out at the end. like you have no idea how much i love this poem. and i'm sure almost everyone on this site can relate to it. wich is awsm. i luv ya anna never forget that! i'm always always here for you! lyl~lex

  • 12 years ago

    by Phantom

    -_-; Know the feeling.

  • LOVED IT!!


  • 12 years ago

    by Xx-TotallyInnocent-xX

    That was so good

  • 12 years ago

    by *puddle ov blak tears*

    I can relli relate, but not so much ne more, relli relli hope u start feelin betta if dis iz bout how u feel!!

  • 12 years ago

    by melly xx

    I love this poem

  • 12 years ago

    by Bobbie Jo

    I liked this poem a real lot it really explains the inner side of a person like my self plus others but good job.

  • 12 years ago

    by ßeAuTiFuLlY~bRoKeи

    Wow i really felt the pain in that one...hang in there hun!

  • 12 years ago

    by Ashleigh M

    This poem made me actually visualize the pain and the bleeding and the black tears. keep up the good work.


  • 12 years ago

    by Beautiful~*~Dragons~*~Fire

    Deep. I could feel the emotion.

  • 12 years ago

    by the middle

    Anna, hun... this is a really good poem-- BUT i HATE to hear you talk like this. i hate knowing you feel like this and that theres nothing i can do. is there anything i can do? i've tried... but i know i'm not of much help to you.
    so i'll just keep telling you i love you, and try n convince to to smile. it's when you look prettiest.
    love u. miss you.

  • 12 years ago

    by End Of Eternity

    Torn Apart-----This is the Mega Hit..

    great poem....lovely use of words...take care