Hey, I really liked this poem, it was great, been there and felt the same way...its a good thing I had someone who picked me up if not for him I dunno where I would be...byt great poem and i read your profile... Love peanut butter and grill cheese is the best ..lol
This is such a beautiful poem. When i read this, i could feel all the emtions u put into it...& u are truly a great writer, i can't find anything to comment, on, but i love this line
I can`t thank him enough
For loving me the way that he does
For being the hope
That nobody else was
You're very lucky...My ex was the same way, we were together for ten months, i guess i needed something like this to realize how much of a godsend he was...but thats not what i'm here to talk about...
Ur poem was amazing, i can relate to how ur feeling...so i will end this by saying great poem, 5/5
Wow.. this was one of the most meaningful and well written poems i have ever written! it was just simply amazing and i wouldnt tell you to change a thing thats how perfect it is! keep it up! you did a great job and i'm gonna read some more!
WOW WOW WOW OMG geesh that was brilliant - how long have you been writing? I truly loved that poem. I only wish I had your talent. I rated it a five by the way bit damn it deserves a lot more than that. WELL DONE!!! =)
Amazing job. i have to say i really liked this poem. I liked how at the end her angel came and told her not to go and that was the only person to stop her i mean it's almost the last person you expect to help you out. Very nice work. keep it up. keep on writing. love always and forever. Ps: thanks for the comment means alot to me.
What's the best thing in life none other than a happy ending?! =)
I notice that some of the alternating lines actually rhymes and I think it helps in keeping the flow together, that's a tough job to do, making a poem flows well and making rhymes that doesn't sound forced. You did a great job. =)
It started off with a sad little girl who has gone through so much and ended with a wonderful love she found. The transition is smooth and it feels like reading a fairytale, which bring back sweet memories to me.
Anyway, I really do enjoy this poem, and sometimes it's great to be able to read a poem that has short verses and still says so much more. Nice write. Thanks for sharing. =)