Comments : Hope.

  • 12 years ago

    by Jenn

    Hey, I really liked this poem, it was great, been there and felt the same way...its a good thing I had someone who picked me up if not for him I dunno where I would be...byt great poem and i read your profile... Love peanut butter and grill cheese is the best

  • 12 years ago

    by Ashley Van Eperen

    This is such a beautiful poem. When i read this, i could feel all the emtions u put into it...& u are truly a great writer, i can't find anything to comment, on, but i love this line
    I can`t thank him enough
    For loving me the way that he does
    For being the hope
    That nobody else was

    You're very lucky...My ex was the same way, we were together for ten months, i guess i needed something like this to realize how much of a godsend he was...but thats not what i'm here to talk about...

    Ur poem was amazing, i can relate to how ur i will end this by saying great poem, 5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Samantha

    Wow.. this was one of the most meaningful and well written poems i have ever written! it was just simply amazing and i wouldnt tell you to change a thing thats how perfect it is! keep it up! you did a great job and i'm gonna read some more!


  • 12 years ago

    by master of shadow

    Great poem, effectivly structured well written and very emotional.

  • 12 years ago

    by Dean Russell-Rands

    WOW WOW WOW OMG geesh that was brilliant - how long have you been writing? I truly loved that poem. I only wish I had your talent. I rated it a five by the way bit damn it deserves a lot more than that. WELL DONE!!! =)

  • 12 years ago

    by Sherry Lynn

    Though it starts out so sad the ending is truly wonderful. You done a great job twisting this piece and giving the reader a different outcome than expected.


  • 12 years ago

    by Truest Lies

    That is VERY nice. It had an innocence, as well as a maturity that was very heart-touching.
    I liked:

    She painted her wrist
    With suicides sin.

    That especially was very dark and beautiful

    //Truest Lies//

  • 12 years ago

    by Katlynn

    Amazing job. i have to say i really liked this poem. I liked how at the end her angel came and told her not to go and that was the only person to stop her i mean it's almost the last person you expect to help you out. Very nice work. keep it up. keep on writing. love always and forever. Ps: thanks for the comment means alot to me.

  • 12 years ago

    by Russell

    I like this poem a lot...its very powerful.I also like the ending very well.Your a great poet..keep up the great work

  • 12 years ago

    by pseudo

    That was a truly touching poem.. very sad but end it all worked out! loved it. if we could all have our happy endings eh.. beautiful piece! keep it up =)


  • 12 years ago

    by t i f f a n y ♥

    Beautiful poem! I can relate to it a lot.. Only, I haven't found that angel yet. Great write.


  • 12 years ago

    by Puerto_Rican_Chick

    I can relate to the poem, only my angel is out of town, i guess you can say. very good poem. 5/5 you did a very good job on it.

  • 12 years ago

    by LadyPearl

    Very inspirational, great job

  • 12 years ago

    by sweet||nothings

    Awww this poem is really good!!
    keep up the good work!

  • 12 years ago

    by Amanda

    Such a sad but beautiful piece of writing. I thought it was really good and i enjoyed reading it to the end. :)

  • 12 years ago

    by SuperJenius

    Wow!!! how long have u been doing this its like youve been writing 4ever
    i loved it

  • 12 years ago

    by xX-jess-Xx

    This poem is really beautiful. i cant really fault it, its lovely! jesxx

  • 12 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    This poem flowed so smoothly into my heart I could her an angel singing through you. I see a light over a dark shadow and feel the presence of Love...... outstanding work

  • 12 years ago

    by ~*~Morgan~*~

    Omg i love this poem so much. Welcome to my favorites. I am in the same situation but no ones given me the hope yet.

  • 12 years ago

    by Dreams

    What's the best thing in life none other than a happy ending?! =)

    I notice that some of the alternating lines actually rhymes and I think it helps in keeping the flow together, that's a tough job to do, making a poem flows well and making rhymes that doesn't sound forced. You did a great job. =)

    It started off with a sad little girl who has gone through so much and ended with a wonderful love she found. The transition is smooth and it feels like reading a fairytale, which bring back sweet memories to me.

    Anyway, I really do enjoy this poem, and sometimes it's great to be able to read a poem that has short verses and still says so much more. Nice write. Thanks for sharing. =)