Hey this was a really good poem. I like the way you describe things in here. you would make a good novel writter. anways, loved your poem. 5/5

This is amazing the description…! Wow...Loved it, the ending was brilliant! Keep writing your great!! 5/5

Beautifull...*5/5*...plzz comment/vote on my poems..thnx...take care

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Noziyna

Wow I am in awe. This was just like my ex. and me. We weren't allowed to date eachother and be with eachother, but when we were none of that mattered because we were in love. Great poem, it really spoke to me, and was touching to me cecause of my past.

-Tainted Mikochan

The ending just flowed. Wicked imaginitive piece.

Lv A, x

Ooo, I likey~~!!

Very touching

That's so good, and so true, but why are they having sex in the snow?

Lmao! They're not, it's hard to explain, I mean, if the girl really was naked outside in the snow, she'd die, it's just i dno... how i wanted to write it

Lmao! They're not, it's hard to explain, I mean, if the girl really was naked outside in the snow, she'd die, it's just i dno... how i wanted to write it

I love this this poem, i can read it over and over again and not get sick of it, your great :)

Beautifully written and some of the best detail I have ever seen. That's better than a 5! :)