Musings Of You

by N J Thornton   Jan 15, 2006


The moon appeared whole that night
At rest, deep within your eyes
Unsure am I of the heavens now

'Though musings of you stay

Our lips became acquainted once
Fervour was in abundance
The season's phase unrecalled

'Though musings of you stay

Honeybee tended to timid rose
I, in your snug embrace
Winter winds almost forgotten

'Though musings of you stay

Joyous faces on a frozen lake
Turn sour with pencilled lines
Nor are you, my love, faultless

'Though musings of you stay

*I wrote this for my fiance. This poem represents the fact that times come and go, and things are forgotten, but our love will never fade. Also, no one or thing is perfect, but differences can make love stronger.
**Additional author notes: This poem purposely has no strict syllable count to emphasis the fact neither love nor life follow a strict sequence. Also, please keep in mind I use the Queen's English. Thanks.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Bridgette

    This is a very good poem.. its kind of unique but I really enjoyed reading it. It's so beautiful and I absolutely loved the first stanza. You did such a wonderful job on this!

  • 18 years ago

    by Sarah Ann

    Wow this is very different but it was also very well penned, not just another cliche love poem. I wish I could write like this, with such beautiful sophisticated words and style. Keep up your lovely work, and thanks for your comment!

    Sarah

  • 18 years ago

    by PS

    This is definetly different. but i like it. the repeating line holds a lot of power and i just love the first stanza. your poem does exactly what you set out to do with it. :)

  • 18 years ago

    by firexflys

    I love how the poem represents thats cute. and the point of the poem is lovely. "things are forgotten but our love does not fade away" amazing poem 5.5

  • 18 years ago

    by Robert

    First of all, thanks a lot for your tips about my poem "The Lonely Model". I really appreciated, and your advice is taken.
    Well done for this poem, i really like the way you write, very creative.

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