Ohh i like it!! nice job!! don't you wish you could just do something over? keep up the good work!! comment back if you would!!

Another awesome poem hun, 5/5

loved it
take care

Good poem, could of used more, but it is your poem so you really dicide, but keep writing.

Aww..I hope you feel better. I know how you feel though, its a touhg feeling to have and life with.

Good job, clearly written
You can try putting in more descriptions and imagery, such as similies. Also, try to use "I" less. Keep it up!

Excellent work! I can relate to this so much, even at this point, though I am with someone else I am still in love with the one I left, and I totally regret it. Keep it up! 5/5

Love poems are your thing and they really do move me as a reader. At time the syllable count was a bit over which mucked up the flow a bit. But love conquered all in this...AWESOME!

[lostlaureate - come find me]

Yet another great poem. I really truely like it. :)))))