Hey darl i dun0 y its been l0w v0ted. ive missed ur p0ems!! h0pe ur all g0od. a t0uching piece. very well written. keep it up

l0ve always d0ra
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Wow. What a beautiful poem! I truly loved it. Wonderful! Couldn't wait for a new poem, and it was worth the waiting! " title?" Erm.. Personally I would have called it "when you go" If I would have wrote this. But I'm a newb so .. hahaha. Love you sweety! -xxx-

Hi dear

well that is really nice. ur poems are too gud as always.
i guess the title can be " miss u... Nick"

keep up the gud work. all d best

Bharti

Awwww hunn thats so sad i hope your ok i havent heard form you in so long i hope you can read some of my poems again.

andrea

Thanks first of all anna. second, you know i wont forget you, but i wont miss you because i know your there and always will be. maybe missing someone just means your insecure about them not being there, but you know i always will. ive made new friends here, kickass friends so i will be chilled out for the year i think. ill write back now, im thinking of putting my songs into music now, minus the skill! so i might record you a song yeh? ill ttyl sweet cheers hunni xxx

Title's cool
welcome back

Tim

Aww you're very sweet. a cute and charming friendship poem filled with love. dazzling! 5/5 and sorry for not commenting so much... but i have to be away for a special reason...

Hey. I really miss you. It's been ages since I did anything on this site...I've been busy and my new computer sucks...

Anyways, I don't have much time, I'll comment later more, but I miss you Anna!

From, still the best, Matt

Aw hun, i know you've told me about him leaving before, aw, im so sorry, but sometimes people have to leave you and you have to learn to let them go, and I think you're learning that very fast, great poem btw, take carexxoxoo

:( So sad.
It's horrendous when someone you love leaves you. Even if it only for a short period of time and they're coming back.

Good to read your poems again.

Lv A, x

Well it seems you have a title now.
Yes, I did go on vacation, you were correct, it was needed, it was more of like a vacation from life, I didn't go anywhere I just didn't think as much, I just tried to live my life carefree for a while, and now I am re-energized to start life all over again.

So anyways, about the poem.

As always you come strong and the poem hits me right in the heart with a baseball bat... It's wonderful and I can really feel it inside of me, I could understand each word, it's as if the poem became a part of me.

And also, it's very sad that you are losing someone you cared about, I hope everything will be alright, I would really hate to lose one of my really good friends.

And I don't know how many times I have said the past,

But the rhyming scheme is wonderful, I love that the rhymes are not forced that everything is so correct and all that. It's a perfect poem.

This will definitely be in my mind for a while.

Thank you for sharing this poem, and please keep up the good work.

Yay! I am getting better at commenting. Look at the length of that comment!

haha

Great poem i loved it so much!!!