Ann that makes me sad! :(,,,,,everyone says its so sad and beautiful (true it is), but they need to read deeper within your words, if and so you were talking about you, you should be comforted..I hope you are ok, this poem gives signs of pain my cyber mommy...*hugs*....but you know, I think everyone has invisible tears, there is always something someone don't know....I did like this write tho...different, unique, super!
Hey dude, this is such a great poem. I dont want to sound like a girly man lol but this is a great poem, and i feel your pain. You aren't the only one who has felt this before and i love how you express not just yourself but your entire relationship with whoever this figure the poem is about. I loved this and its very touching.......keep writing some stuff plz lol i want to hear more