Comments : Invisible Tears

  • 11 years ago

    by dReAMeRgRL18

    A great poem!! =)

  • 11 years ago

    by Bill Turner

    Ann, what a beautifully written poem. So sad, yet a wonderful ode to the feelings within.

  • 11 years ago

    by Simon Hayes

    Oh so touching, so deep and... WOW! A lovely write Ann!

  • 11 years ago

    by Kim

    So sad and beautiful, wonderfully done Ann!

  • 11 years ago

    by Shelby Bridges

    I never get tired of reading your poems
    because they are so well written....5/5

    Shelby

  • 11 years ago

    by JJ

    Short, sweet and beautiful. I love this!

  • 11 years ago

    by Cuddles

    This is so sad and touching. Beautiful write!

  • 11 years ago

    by Jay27

    Wow, perfect score on this one. well done ann.

  • 11 years ago

    by Chelsey

    Ann that makes me sad! :(,,,,,everyone says its so sad and beautiful (true it is), but they need to read deeper within your words, if and so you were talking about you, you should be comforted..I hope you are ok, this poem gives signs of pain my cyber mommy...*hugs*....but you know, I think everyone has invisible tears, there is always something someone don't know....I did like this write tho...different, unique, super!
    Love always
    Chelsey

  • 11 years ago

    by Gesselle Valle

    This poem's so amazing, just like you! I love it...so sad yet so touching... just wanted to stop by and read your amazing poetry. Take care my friend.

  • 11 years ago

    by Suri dawn

    This is a very good poem!Great job!

  • 11 years ago

    by Malenda

    Absoultly beautiful!!!!!!!!!!!!1

  • 11 years ago

    by Ashley

    Great poem! I can really relate to it! I really liked the 3rd and 4th stanzas, and I loved the line "Memories live forever, dreams never go away" So true, beautiful. Keep it up!!

  • 11 years ago

    by Heidi

    Anne, all your writings are perfect, along with this one. it's very sad, but it's very very well written. you work inspires me, and i'm sure it inspires thousands of other young poets. amazing work..

  • 11 years ago

    by lilia

    Beautiful...5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by lilia

    Beautiful...5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by Tr!c!a_s@tanicangel

    I loved it....great job.

  • 11 years ago

    by Chyrelle

    Hey this is like my poem unseen tears i wrote like 2 yrs ago. thats is freaky

  • 11 years ago

    by Danny Bloom

    Hey dude, this is such a great poem. I dont want to sound like a girly man lol but this is a great poem, and i feel your pain. You aren't the only one who has felt this before and i love how you express not just yourself but your entire relationship with whoever this figure the poem is about. I loved this and its very touching.......keep writing some stuff plz lol i want to hear more

  • 11 years ago

    by Alexis

    Your poem is sad but I can relate to it. Great job!