Listen to me

by Ike Dizzle   Feb 25, 2006


(This poem is about my mom because she is engaged to be marrying some guy. My grandmother and I are trying to stop her. Enjoy the poem)

Sometimes I just wish
You would listen to us
HE IS NOT WHAT HE SEEMS
And he must
Be stopped
Before you make this mistake
Can’t you see?
This man is truly fake
I’m standing in the way
I refuse
To let you
Become used
By some man who wants
To get what he wants
By some man who willl
Make you feel daunt
Please say no
To the question he will ask
For the truth
Will finally be unmasked
And all his wishes
Will be disparaged
Please listen to us and
Call off this marriage.

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  • 9 years ago

    by Bradley Peter

    First thing I want to know, is did she marry him or not?

    This was okay as a poem, it just didn't flow very well. I didn't like this bit;

    'I refuse
    To let you
    Become used'

    Because it was too short and broke what flow there was.

    Brad

  • 9 years ago

    by pLeASeTakEMyHeArT

    Damn, u spoke the truth and u see the truth, and the truth u was seeing dat guy was no good.. U seem a caring son to your mother which you want to make her happy, and I hopr she does called it off, didn't she? U got all these word was difficult to put into great reasons.

  • 11 years ago

    by lana

    Wow i hope she listens to you my mum has been married 4 times and all are wrong
    and i tryed to stop
    the guy she with is still wrong

    5/5 beautiful poem
    brings tears back
    hope all is well

    lana

  • 11 years ago

    by Moose

    I'm giving you 5/5, just for the sheer fact you were brave enough to freestyle this, not many people are good at it and its very hard. I have no idea what Disparaged means, but in freestyle, dont go out of your way to make words rhyme, very meaningfull.
    5/5

    Bryce

  • 11 years ago

    by JustAnotherLonelyGirlHilary

    Hey great poem 5/5 i hope your mom listens to you and calls off the marrage im sorry this happend -thanks for the comment on my poem

    5/5 GREAT JOB im here for yea