Listen to me

First thing I want to know, is did she marry him or not?

This was okay as a poem, it just didn't flow very well. I didn't like this bit;

'I refuse
To let you
Become used'

Because it was too short and broke what flow there was.

Brad

Damn, u spoke the truth and u see the truth, and the truth u was seeing dat guy was no good.. U seem a caring son to your mother which you want to make her happy, and I hopr she does called it off, didn't she? U got all these word was difficult to put into great reasons.

Wow i hope she listens to you my mum has been married 4 times and all are wrong
and i tryed to stop
the guy she with is still wrong

5/5 beautiful poem
brings tears back
hope all is well

lana

I'm giving you 5/5, just for the sheer fact you were brave enough to freestyle this, not many people are good at it and its very hard. I have no idea what Disparaged means, but in freestyle, dont go out of your way to make words rhyme, very meaningfull.
5/5

Bryce

Hey great poem 5/5 i hope your mom listens to you and calls off the marrage im sorry this happend -thanks for the comment on my poem

5/5 GREAT JOB im here for yea