Double Homicide

by Ike Dizzle   Jul 5, 2008


Crips on the left
Bloods on the right
Leaders faced off
Everyone broke out into a fight

Bullets flying everywhere
Bodies falling down
But at the end of the day
Only 2 bodies were found

The 2 leaders still standing
Both with guns at hand
Trying to prove one thing
Whos the better man

They both pull the trigger
The guns fell aside
Both men fall in
A double homicide

So now its a battlefield
Nothing but dead bodies here
Now thousands of people dead
Because 2 groups wasnt happy here

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  • 14 years ago

    by never let go of the falling angels

    Wow great job....i liked how you wrote this out 5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by Fredy

    The poem has a great flow and it speaks volumes of the problems society is facing, however the last stanza lost a little of the flow the others were filled with.

  • 15 years ago

    by Bradley Peter

    A descent enough poem. I liked the flow and rhymes of the third stanza, disliked the closing stanza for those reasons. Sorry, if this seems harsh, but it just seems really, really average to me.

    Brad

  • 15 years ago

    by Gasttlee

    It's been a while. You bring reality into this poem. It reminds me of the crime and problems of our society. 5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by Jessica

    This paints a good picture in your head, it's unique and overall a good poem. good job. =]

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