Comments : Welcome to my life

  • 12 years ago

    by Trampled Angel

    Hey hun, this was a very sad poem with a lot of expression and a sad tail to tell and I life similar to my own story. I send you hugs, because right now that's all I can do. Scars will be with your forever and when you glue a broke heart there are still cracks, but those marks are a reminder of how far you have come. I heart goes out to you.

    -Tainted Mikochan

  • 12 years ago

    by Allison

    That was awsome. *5/5*

  • 12 years ago

    by myxlittlexcut

    This is one of my favorites by you

    this stanza was really cool:
    "How do you save me?
    When I've fallen so far
    How can you heal these wounds
    Which have turned to scars?"

    but this poem was great over all as well
    you did a really good job this time

  • 12 years ago

    by The Ghost Of Tom Joad

    Excellent poem,very well written.

  • 12 years ago

    by MEGAN BUTTERLY

    Great poem, i feel the same way, but i couldnt put in words so great as yours.
    5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by eternitySOlong

    Wow! Honestly, I wasn't that into it until the end. I loved it! Those are some damn good questions that I've come to realize...most can't answer!

  • 12 years ago

    by AmberNichole

    Im really sorry. I hope everything turns out okay and gets better. Keep writing.

  • 12 years ago

    by ToxicSpookyAngel

    I feel actually the same way....i really love this poem

  • 12 years ago

    by ToxicSpookyAngel

    Exactly*

  • 12 years ago

    by JL

    Wow, that hits close to home. I ask myself this alot, and never get an answer. I suppose you could try and find something that makes you smile. And hey at least you've never given up, seeing as you're still here. *hugs* take care XXXXX
    JL

  • 12 years ago

    by LoStxInxVoIcEs

    Omfg that is the greatest poem i think i have ever read it al flows so well keep it up i love it nice writing

  • 12 years ago

    by LoStxInxVoIcEs

    Omfg that is the greatest poem i think i have ever read it al flows so well keep it up i love it nice writing

  • 12 years ago

    by May Lee

    A powerful poem, 5/5 keep writing, and i hope things turn out for the better :-). *smiles*

  • 12 years ago

    by mikeb

    Wow i know exactly how u feel... like right when u wake up it hits u, and it hits hard and u wonder why u even get up and go thru ur day... thx for puttin it into words

  • 12 years ago

    by Flying angel

    Excellent it was so real and full of emotions. it really explains alot and gives the full explanaion of the title.

  • 12 years ago

    by Elynnka

    Beautiful! My favourite part was:
    "I just want to be held close
    But I know I'll push everyone away
    I'm too scared to let anyone in
    Because I know no one will stay"

    I'm sorry you feel that way though :(
    *hugs you*
    Take care dear and stay strong, not for the others but for yourself.

    ~*~~**m.c.flem**~~*~

  • 12 years ago

    by Jill

    Its really good

  • 12 years ago

    by *kAnDiE*

    Damn this ROCKS!! u almost got me in tears over here!! well yea i no how u feel!!! i can relate too this!! awesome job!! keep up the EXCELLENT WORK!! 5/5 for sure!! and check out some of my stuff sometime if u want!!
    x0x0
    kandie!!

  • 12 years ago

    by xo~heartsforeva~ox

    Hey babe!
    I love your poem! You have a LOT of insight and I know that that is the life the 2 of us live in right now! It's not great but we have to remember that we will ALWAYS have eachother by our side!! ily lots!!

  • 12 years ago

    by GretaInsideOut

    I feel the same.
    thats all i can say.
    i know i need help but i cant
    i seems whenever i do i push poeple away.
    thankyou.
    i know i am no longer alone
    gretski