Comments : Passion's Delusions

  • 11 years ago

    by myshiningstar14

    WOW niice words usage..amazing rythem and motion....just a phat poem lol. niice jobb please keep writign i look forward ot radign tons more..adn please please please read sum of my poems as many as u desire and i will be SURRRE to read more....thnxs

    :) always Lissa

  • 11 years ago

    by master of shadow

    Brilliantly written, great use of vocab and progression thoughout the peice. it flows well and maintains interest thoughout

    5/5

  • 10 years ago

    by Sophie

    Well done. a really good write! so much emotion and the flow is brilliant.

    sophie:)

    ps. thanx 4 the comment

  • 10 years ago

    by Hannah Emellia

    Ohmigosh, SAD!
    Nicely written, lot's of emotion. I really enjoyed reading it. =)
    Thank's for the comment.

    Happy writing,
    Hannah-

  • 10 years ago

    by Rocky

    Such a sad but true poem. i loved the imagery especially in the last stanza. keep it up. and would you read some of mine if you want to. especially - your soul asks why- and tell me what you think

  • 10 years ago

    by DAYLON

    I have taken timeout to read some more of your work. You must have got a book out as the work you write is awesome.

  • 10 years ago

    by Elapsed

    Very nice write.. excellent imagery great flow and structure.. Well done.. Keep them coming