Ooh I liked the twist on the last line from "she" to "you." I think you used some lovely and powerful descriptions that really painted an image in my mind. I found it a very touching write indeed. On the first line of the last stanza I think you're missing "were."
Well done, very well written.
WoW my imagination is going crazy lol i adored this poem espacially this :"Blue eyes sad like the ocean longing for the faith of the sea." i don't know why but that touched me the most! another great job :)
Another great one I ahve to say, very creative, and the words you used were captivating, like a dreamer your poems are so imaginary, it's like you think of places, feelings and gracefully put them in wrods great job!