My sacrifice

by WakeboardxChick   Mar 27, 2006


You look up to me
Cry my sacrifice
when you said you had always loved me

now i you
should have
never dated you
the knife is piercing in
i can't breath

slowly dying you cried my sacrifice
now are you sufficed
with my

You'll be sorry now
I'll come back again
i have a vengeance too strong to obtain

Then you'll be my Sacrifice.

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  • 17 years ago

    by ruth

    Really deep. I can tell there was a lot going on in your head.....Feel free to voice your opinion on my writing, every comment helps!!

  • 18 years ago

    by pale angel

    It it great i thank that you are doing a great job keep it up

    heather

  • 18 years ago

    by Clown

    A little twisted, some typos, but good, all in all. 4/5