I wonder if people understood this poem, it seems that the low rating could have been a result of someone just not understanding what you were saying... Or maybe someone was downvoting you because you're a mod.
In any case, I enjoyed the breakup of the 'ologies', and I felt that the flow of the first two stanzas was really strong, and that the third stanza offered a sort of emotional and theoretical foundation for the rest of the poem; a fitting end.
Okay, that's what real poetry is. Unfortunately, I am nowhere near the ability to play with words in a way that is clever, interpretive, and rhythmic. In fact, a Preschooler could produce better! But you...yeah, you are a true poet and that's something to be proud of. Great writing, and your side note makes me more ashamed than ever. You wrote this on the way to class? Woo.
Oh, I like this, Kevin! I belief I understand what you're meaning by this -- taking a look at sociology, psychology, maybe 'ologies' in general -- and how they mingle, differ, mayhap even distort and corrupt.
If that's not what you intended, my apologies. But whether or not I'm getting it, I find it very amusing in a wry, perhaps even sardonic manner.