I love this poem 5/5

Oh thats good. i almost makes me wanna cry.

This one almost made me cry. i loved it 5/5++

I thought this was touching because you were explaining everything going on in your life to the one person who'll always be there to listen to you. Now for constructive:

I liked the organization and the rhymes. What it lacked in word choice *since you were explaining* it made up with depth and emotions. 5/5

Great job! I like how you wrote about your own life experiences and everything that was going on in your life that was touching! Great flow..Umm there really isnt anything wrong with this poem. just a suggestion for the next poem you write on your experiences try to explain your feelings a little more. Thats it other than that its just about perfect great write ;)

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What a wonderful poem you've done here, well expressive emotion within your beautiful penned. very touching to the heart. nice flow with good ryhme. love gloria.

This poem is really great and no i didn't cry i think what your saying is a positive message and i smiled when i read it cos i think that's what your mom did xox chiaki

Hey you, this one touched my heart. A very powerful, beautiful poem but very sad indeed! Hope that you are ok, I miss my mum too but she's still alive. I was put into care when I was small after years of abuse so in a way I don't have a mum but for a different reason. Keep your head up high xxxx

Omg i nearly cried reading this. this is a really great poem. v.sad but really great.
you have just made it onto my faves list!!

keep writing
love jess XxXxXxXx

Awww..this was really good. Ummm im sorry i just noticed that you were one of those jesus people...and i said something about one of your poems and im sorry if i offened you. Well comment back if you want.
Later,
Kerstin

*tears* I love how you write! I had tears in my eyes as i read this..You are sooo true to your poem..keep up the wonderful work....I mean someone who can write that good should go to great things in there future if you become famouse i can tell ppl hey i remember his wonderful poems and he is the best!
With great love-
Kally

This is so sad. I love the format you used for this..it gave a very deep insight into your life...and I loved the intimacy between you and your mother as well as the realness sustained throughout the poem....my favourite of those I've read today....keep it up...

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That was awesome. I almost broke a tear. Thats one of the best I've read on this sight. (your going on my favorites) keep it cool and keep it up

-Janean

GREAT job! I like this alot. I know someone who just lost his dad, and he is heart broken I know.

Lots of love,
Harlie

I love this poem, excellent rhyming and the structure works briliantly, some spelling/typing mistakes tho

I love your poem..I know how u feel....My uncle is gone and he was the only one who understood me...

Oh wow. that was so amazing. i almost started cryign from it. i wish that i could share my story through writing as well as you can. good job..

Wow that an awesome poem, really creative and sad... 5/5