Comments : Emotional Storm

  • 12 years ago

    by glass*wall*prison

    Wow alot of emotions great word choice

    great write



  • 12 years ago

    by PS

    I absolutely love the last stanza. besides that you have amazing imagery => word choice. beautiful.

  • 12 years ago

    by A Broken Bleeding Soul

    You have your way with words. Your words just fit together so perfectly. 5/5

    ~ Tina

  • 12 years ago

    by Cuddles

    Wow, Kaylee!! This is simply amazing. Magnificent! You know, words really are inadequate. I can't think of any to describe how wonderful this poem is.

  • 12 years ago

    by Sole

    Excellent imagery - great poem, such beauty :( I only wish I could write like you **Is Jealous**.

    Peace. [Sole]

  • 12 years ago

    by Simon Hayes

    Wow! Emotional and deep. The title perfect, the poem ever so enjoyable. Incredible writing :)

  • 12 years ago

    by DavidBrendan

    Built me up to break me down..I felt strongly the emotions expressed. Good job 5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Italian Stallion

    Awesome, this poem is filled with emotion. I could picture the whole thing. awesome Job.

  • 12 years ago

    by Angie

    You know i've got to say, your poems are the most imaginative poems i've ever read. Just the way you word them, makes me think and I get this image in my head of whats going on. To be able to do that is a hard skill to achieve and you've done it.

    This poem was beautiful! Nice use of vocabulary and structure. You expressed every line with such emotion and depth. You definately have a talent. Keep up the fantastic work! 5/5


  • 12 years ago

    by avery

    I like the way this poem was written.
    With the two words at the top followed by a discription almost.
    Very good. Keep writing xoxox

  • 12 years ago

    by ShadowDancer

    Beautiful. the use of 'its gone' at the end of each stanza was extralmy effective. the imagry (my favorite part of poetry) was beathtaking. i loved it it.


  • 12 years ago

    by SilentDreams

    I like the use of contrast here and the way it has been written. Great poem from start to finish.

  • 12 years ago

    by blackrose1011

    I love your use of puncutaion! great read, awesome! The form of the poem also adds to the way it is read, and makes the feelings so much more real.

    thanks for commenting on mine!

  • 12 years ago

    by Natalie

    Wow, I really liked this one! They way you worded it just made it sound so pure and great! I totally loved it! Keep it up 5/5

    luv natalie x-x

  • 12 years ago

    by creeesta

    It's so beautifully expressive... good job!! :)

  • 12 years ago

    by Jacqui Armstrong

    Wow i loved this poem, i dont know exactly what but something made it different to anything i have ever reas, it built up...

    well written!


  • 12 years ago

    by ├Truely_Spoken┤

    I lik teh idea and flow of teh poem, good job
    could you please read/comment/rate my new poem, impulse

  • 12 years ago

    by Kaitlyn

    Wow. You use alot of emotion and deepth into your writing. It keeps me interested in it. I really like it. and the use of words is really great.

  • 12 years ago

    by azlan26

    The use of short sentances hammers in every single point. It makes it seems like nothing else is on your mind and also gives the impression of being factual.
    Differering the very last line to make it more personal was also extremely effective.

  • 12 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    You are so talented Kaylee, keep writing, i love your work