Comments : Free And Beautiful No Longer

  • 11 years ago

    by xX-jess-Xx

    Aw gorjus poem, beautiful. i specially liked;

    "She presses her hands
    against the window glass
    while waiting for the time to pass"

    i love the way you write.
    jesxx

  • 11 years ago

    by Italian Stallion

    Wonderfully written. I loved it. one of the best Nature poems I have read. keep up the good work.

  • 11 years ago

    by Simon Hayes

    Wonderful nature poem... Very powerful and deep. Enjoyable from start to finish... :)

  • 11 years ago

    by Natalie

    This was really good. I don`t think theres anything i would change to it. It was beautiful! 5/5

    luv natalie x-x-x

  • 11 years ago

    by Steven Beesley

    Kaylee,

    Hats off and bowing, kudos! This is such a superb and splendid write, it is so lovely the way you have portrayed nature and it's grandeur. Well done.

    Warmest regards,

    Warmest regards,

    Steve

  • 11 years ago

    by Allen

    WOW, wow! that poem was fantastic. i love nature poems, i love your poem... that was a well written structured poem. well done.. keep it up

  • 11 years ago

    by lost_laureate

    Wonderful stuff....pathetic fallacy is definitely your thing. Meaningful and engaging poem....great stuff one of the most versatile writers I know...

    [lostlaureate - come find me]

  • 11 years ago

    by master of shadow

    Very well written peice, full of very vivid descriptions and great use of vocab. very well constructed and protrayed

    5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by Emma

    Beautiful...great meaning....i loved it....
    Emma 5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by Dark Kitten

    This is a very creative and special poem. Though I am not much for the flow of it because it does not keep the beat. That lowers the value of this poem.

  • 11 years ago

    by Kaitlyn

    Wow. im speachless. this so so beautiful. constructed well. its just gah amazing. I love it. I pictured every minute of it. well done.
    Kat.

  • 11 years ago

    by azlan26

    I love the way the trees talk, making them seem more human - you poem makes nature seem like one living being - that, very truly, humans are killing.
    So much emotion in this poem, hard to write a decent enough comment about it.

  • 11 years ago

    by Sole

    That's truly awesome - I wish I could write nature poems as you can, my attempt left people cringing!! Very impressive write . . loved it.

    Peace. [Sole]

  • 11 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    Now, i loved that poem. It was brilliant, your are a fantastic writer.
    Love Tara-Kay
    xxxxx

  • 11 years ago

    by *~vixen~*

    This is most likely the best poem about nature that i've read.

  • 11 years ago

    by Chelsey

    Kaylee! WOW I am taken away!

  • 11 years ago

    by Bridgette

    I've never really been into nature poems, but i absolutely loved this one. great job!

  • 11 years ago

    by Fallen~Tears

    Wow.. i didnt think someone could make nature interesting but you did.. it HAS to be the best poem about nature.. Your an amazing writer keep up the great work 5/5

    ~!*FallenTears~!*
    ~!*Meaghen~!*

  • 11 years ago

    by LESTREX

    Nice well thought out

  • 11 years ago

    by Lost & Delirious

    This is a great poem, I love the descriptions you gave, and how you expressed yourself about an actual problem. Very original. Keep writing. 5/5