Its a very beautiful poem. the imagery in it is wonderful. a truly amazing read! x

I don't often enjoy poems about nature....but you've flooded this poem with a brilliant array of imagery:

"Shed the shadows haunting thee,"
pleaded those ancient timber trees.
//
release their tears in curtained rain.

I really enjoyed this piece. Very powerful.

You know, not many poems can give you the feeling that this one gives. You painted a picture. motionless, and yet breathing. Very well done. 5/5

This is by far the most beautiful and powerful nature poem i've ever read, again an amzing use of words and excellent structure =) 5/5

~StefQ

It was good you are very talented you create a beautiful scene no matter what you are wtiting about if that makes sense

I love this good! your a good writer.

I mean i love this* can't type right now

Wow! very beautifully written...awesome job dear! 5/5

Awesome poem!! i love it its great!! if you write a new one i would love to see it my email is kingzuniga89@aol.com

Amazing! WOW! I love this piece. Amazing job.

How do you get your ideas for your poems i love them

I love how your poems could stand on their own as a set of beautiful words, however you always add something deeper to your poems giving the images emotions to carry, and a message to send. I, as it seems you have as well, have thought from time to time, how beautiful this world once was, before so much damage had been done to it. It is an interesting thought, most certainly.

-Tainted Mikochan

That was a wonderful poem! You seem to capture nature so beautifully, it was probably the best nature poem I have ever read. I loved the picture, the words...beautiful. Keep up your talent and never stop writing. 5/5

That was so beautiful. I liked this one and I'm glad that I got the chance to read it. Keep up the good work. 5/5

Great job. Long..But really good . i couldnt stop reading it.

I liked this poem.. a great piece you have written. A job well done.. :) Keep it up!

Amazing poem, you truly have a talent, keep up the superb work, you're doing. Check out some of my poems when you have the time.

Best Wishes
Wallace