Hey! Yet another unique piece from you. That's gotta be my most favourite thing about your writes, is that I can never really expect anything from them, because I'm constantly being surprised. (Surprised in a good way 'mind you) I really liked the imagery of how you were watching something else happen, for example your funeral... It was neat and very interesting! Great job!
I'm quite surprised at this poem, how ur writing about satan and a girl i believe very diff side i'm seeing its really great!!! i love reading ur poetry coz each time i do its different from the last peice, keep it up huni xox me
A Dream or A Nightmare... yeah, I get alot of those as well. lol.... This poem is very unique as I already told you. Its quiet an imagination you got here. Loved it, and as you can see, others feel the same way about it, otherwise it wouldnt make it to the top so soon. All the best to you because you sure deserve it. :-)
A warning, I would say, from your higher Self, to align your concsiousness with your desires, and to strive to stay integrated in your focused intentions...chaos is not really a pleasure...physically, or Spiritually.....a deep and revealing dream well worth pondering....a few rough spots in the delivery..but then, it was most likely a difficult vision to experience...Quite something to share!
It was.....different. At first it seemed to have been random ramblings yet at the same time it didn't. Now that was a really wicked weird and cool piece with the twist it has. Though the flow was not as strong as it could've been.
At first I didn't like the poem..but when I read it till the very last stanza..I totally Luved the meanings and the idea!!!
You're a gifted writer and you deserve the best
Best Of Luck