Comments : A Dream or A Nightmare

  • 11 years ago

    by Just Wishes

    I woder was it really a dream or nightmare or just a poem you postes bcoz its a kid of weird :D

    love

  • 11 years ago

    by Void

    Hey! Yet another unique piece from you. That's gotta be my most favourite thing about your writes, is that I can never really expect anything from them, because I'm constantly being surprised. (Surprised in a good way 'mind you) I really liked the imagery of how you were watching something else happen, for example your funeral... It was neat and very interesting! Great job!

  • 11 years ago

    by DBM

    I liked it a lot. Your feelings seem very well translated through it... Nice job, and keep up the good work.

    *DeAtHbYmOnKeYs*

  • 11 years ago

    by Lithium

    I'm quite surprised at this poem, how ur writing about satan and a girl i believe very diff side i'm seeing its really great!!! i love reading ur poetry coz each time i do its different from the last peice, keep it up huni xox me

  • 11 years ago

    by Melissa

    Really dark and haunting.. The first and fourth stanza were my favorites, awesome writing!

  • 11 years ago

    by The Angel of Secrets

    O, this kind of creeped me out, yet I liked it. It was very exiting to read.

    Excellent

  • 11 years ago

    by Princess Love

    A Dream or A Nightmare... yeah, I get alot of those as well. lol.... This poem is very unique as I already told you. Its quiet an imagination you got here. Loved it, and as you can see, others feel the same way about it, otherwise it wouldnt make it to the top so soon. All the best to you because you sure deserve it. :-)

    Love
    Michelle

  • 11 years ago

    by Sungrl And Mrs Whatsit

    A warning, I would say, from your higher Self, to align your concsiousness with your desires, and to strive to stay integrated in your focused intentions...chaos is not really a pleasure...physically, or Spiritually.....a deep and revealing dream well worth pondering....a few rough spots in the delivery..but then, it was most likely a difficult vision to experience...Quite something to share!

  • 11 years ago

    by Momentary Relapse

    It was.....different. At first it seemed to have been random ramblings yet at the same time it didn't. Now that was a really wicked weird and cool piece with the twist it has. Though the flow was not as strong as it could've been.
    ~Fallen

  • 11 years ago

    by Steven Beesley

    This is very unusual and dark, the imagery in the write is also very vivid. An interesting read, good job.

    Best regards,

    Steve

  • 11 years ago

    by JASSILEM

    Why satan? And not God? lol.Nice one anyway.

  • 11 years ago

    by PURE HEART

    Oh dear! after a long gap u came up wid such a dark poem. u wer into love poems for a long but really happy to see ur such love towrads dark poems.

    gr8 job done
    luv
    Bharti

  • 11 years ago

    by sarah

    This is a fantastic piece of work, def got my 5 vote, The wording you have used is great, and it flows perfectly. take care and keep writing Sarah x

  • 11 years ago

    by Erika

    Wow, that's powerful, I really liked it, it made so much sense to me. Very deep, beautiful, totally loved it.

  • 11 years ago

    by Knee

    At first I didn't like the poem..but when I read it till the very last stanza..I totally Luved the meanings and the idea!!!
    You're a gifted writer and you deserve the best
    Best Of Luck
    Yours
    NemO x0x0x0x0x

  • 11 years ago

    by Faye

    If this was a nightmare, then what an exprince. this is amzing.

  • 11 years ago

    by silvervein

    What an amazing piece!!!!! brilliant!!!!!

  • 11 years ago

    by bOlly danCer

    Oh man thats really emotional.....5/5....u got talent in dark poems too.....mmmmmm......i wonder if its a dream or nightmare too.
    hope u find ur answer.

    sonam

  • 11 years ago

    by Leanna

    Love it!! that is REALLY good!! ~*~Leena~*~

  • 11 years ago

    by norman

    Wow!! this is great and i litteratly said wow after reading this. its very insitefull nad understandable