I woder was it really a dream or nightmare or just a poem you postes bcoz its a kid of weird :D

love

Hey! Yet another unique piece from you. That's gotta be my most favourite thing about your writes, is that I can never really expect anything from them, because I'm constantly being surprised. (Surprised in a good way 'mind you) I really liked the imagery of how you were watching something else happen, for example your funeral... It was neat and very interesting! Great job!

I liked it a lot. Your feelings seem very well translated through it... Nice job, and keep up the good work.

*DeAtHbYmOnKeYs*

I'm quite surprised at this poem, how ur writing about satan and a girl i believe very diff side i'm seeing its really great!!! i love reading ur poetry coz each time i do its different from the last peice, keep it up huni xox me

Really dark and haunting.. The first and fourth stanza were my favorites, awesome writing!

O, this kind of creeped me out, yet I liked it. It was very exiting to read.

Excellent

A Dream or A Nightmare... yeah, I get alot of those as well. lol.... This poem is very unique as I already told you. Its quiet an imagination you got here. Loved it, and as you can see, others feel the same way about it, otherwise it wouldnt make it to the top so soon. All the best to you because you sure deserve it. :-)

Love
Michelle

A warning, I would say, from your higher Self, to align your concsiousness with your desires, and to strive to stay integrated in your focused intentions...chaos is not really a pleasure...physically, or Spiritually.....a deep and revealing dream well worth pondering....a few rough spots in the delivery..but then, it was most likely a difficult vision to experience...Quite something to share!

It was.....different. At first it seemed to have been random ramblings yet at the same time it didn't. Now that was a really wicked weird and cool piece with the twist it has. Though the flow was not as strong as it could've been.
~Fallen

This is very unusual and dark, the imagery in the write is also very vivid. An interesting read, good job.

Best regards,

Steve

Why satan? And not God? lol.Nice one anyway.

Oh dear! after a long gap u came up wid such a dark poem. u wer into love poems for a long but really happy to see ur such love towrads dark poems.

gr8 job done
luv
Bharti

This is a fantastic piece of work, def got my 5 vote, The wording you have used is great, and it flows perfectly. take care and keep writing Sarah x

Wow, that's powerful, I really liked it, it made so much sense to me. Very deep, beautiful, totally loved it.

At first I didn't like the poem..but when I read it till the very last stanza..I totally Luved the meanings and the idea!!!
You're a gifted writer and you deserve the best
Best Of Luck
Yours
NemO x0x0x0x0x

If this was a nightmare, then what an exprince. this is amzing.

What an amazing piece!!!!! brilliant!!!!!

Oh man thats really emotional.....5/5....u got talent in dark poems too.....mmmmmm......i wonder if its a dream or nightmare too.
hope u find ur answer.

sonam

Love it!! that is REALLY good!! ~*~Leena~*~

Wow!! this is great and i litteratly said wow after reading this. its very insitefull nad understandable