Thx,for your comment
i love this poem.

This is a really clever poem, I enjoyed how it all flows and how you have crafted your words. Even though it is obviously confined to the rhyming structure, your rhyming doesn't sound forced at all. Nice job :)

You've crafted this very well with what is (let's be honest) a limited selection of possible rhymes. An entertaining read: well done.

If someone had told me that they could write a poem using ten words rhyming with 'obsession' I would've laughed at them.

This was great.

//Tragic\\

Oh, by the way, I gave you a 5/5

This was very well done. Did you find it hard to incorpertate those many words ending with "sion"? I think I would find it hard. but you did a great job with it!