Excellent. I can truly relate. 5/5, Keep writing and check out some of mine if you will. -Thanks-

Great again Barbara 5/5
No one should have to go through as much pain as it's clear you have, but remember, as I've said before, it's the pain and hardships that we are forced to go through that make us strong.
xoxox Rhea xoxox

Wow
that is really intense
the flow is excellent and the theme is very compelling
5/5 and an add to my faves!

Oooooh, a hint of evil at the ending maybe? lol
mother doesent seem motherly at all in here...can say that I can relate in a few ways...
great job as always,
-shattered

Beautifully written...very powerful and intense.....keep it up! 5/5

You write with such sincerity in your poems, and I think that is one reason that draws me into them. You let everyone know what has happened to the character in your poem and how they are coping. Excellent job. 5/5