Ann, thank you very much for this poem, i know sometimes life is like a cloud, and i don't when is my turn....great penned as always, if sometimes i couldn't come to visit your beautiful penned nor your site, i will do it very sooner, you please take good care myfriend, god bless you forever, take care. bert.
I have two suggestions if you don't mind. One being that you use the word, "Away" twice in the first stanza both at the end of a sentence. It just kind of takes something away from it. Another is the extra exclaimation points in one of your stanzas, because to me, and it might just be me, but it feels as if it's shouting too much and breaks the calmness you had.
What an inspiring piece Ann for all those people struggling to cope with day to day life and situations. You give a great essence of hope in your words for those who need it and its great advice you have listed that I couldnt agree with more :o)
Sometimes Ann I just wish we could post peoples poems like these on billboards, in the newspapers, all around town..so they know there are people like you who care and continue praying and its people like you who still can make a change in someones lives with your sweet caring heart! I admire that a lot and when I'm you age...I hope to be just like you...my heart still pure gold!
Love you tons
Ann, I will have to come back and read this poem every day for it lifted my spirits cause I've been feeling this way lately and you know my reasons why...... this write is beautiful, inspirational and powerful.....
I love this. It's so very beautiful and I can relate.. God is there for us in every way and He will never leave us or forsake us. Thank you so much for writing this poem and allowing me to read this =)
Keep it up! Take Care and God Bless,
Hey i'm back. A poem to cheer me up! It was wonderful to read as all of your work Ann. I'm awefully sorry I havent been commenting for a while, I'm just feeling a little down at the moment. I'm sure it will pass by soon. Thankyou for always being there to make me feel better - luv ya hun xxx