Cute poem the over all message is really nice keep up the good work.

Very very nice...

This POEM is beautiful!!! lol.. But really.... all the way through, it wasnt bad, it definatly held your signature style, and was definatly good.. but the last stanza is what really caught me.. I loved it. It tied it all together perfectly and was just a really great ending! Great work!!!

Aw. The last stanza was so good. A really great way to end the poem. The flow and rhyming were okay, a lil shaky, but the poem overall was really good. So 5/5 =] && Thanks so much for your comments.

`taleee xx

I really liked this poem, everything it says is so true. Love is everything in life. And it's beautifully written.

Great job! 5/5

"lost in the shove."
I'm not sure I liked this rhyme, it seemed out of place and constructed purely for the scheme.
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I liked the ending, though I feel that if you had ended with the rhyme scheme you had carried all along the ending might have more force. Good poem.

Beautiful poem. It's inspirational, in a way. keep it up

I really like this, I usually don't like repetition poems, but this one seems to fit well, and it didn't repeat itself the whole time. My favorite stanza was:
Life is beautiful,
and so they say...
yet so dull,
until you can feel;
all the emotions,
that can't be more real.
I love that stanza. I also love the way that you ended it. It all seems very well thought out and straight from the heart. Great job on this. 5/5

Wow! That was really good! I really liked the repetition! It held my attention all the was through. The last stanza was my favorite. Good job! Keep it up!

Cayce x

Original writing style. I like the redundancy of "Life is beautiful, and so they say..." My favorite stanza was:

"Life is beautiful,
and so they say...
yet so empty,
until you can share;
the moments in life,
with the one you care."

Overall rating: 4/5. Keep up the good work :)

~BJ~

Nice. I loved the change in stanza format. It added emotion to the poem very well. The repetition also added great effect to the poetry.

Peace. [Sole]

I thought this was cute and inspiring.
The wording was a pleasure o read, as was the imagery.
You did a great job.

This was an interesting piece. I like the lines with which you begin each stanza. The repetitiveness works with this piece. The second stanza was my favorite and so true. It was a sad but still upbeat piece all in one.
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Charisma*

Ok, it was
an instering peice
but in a good way
i liked the pattern in
your rhyming
but at points it seems that
you forced the rhymes

but still a good poem that deserves

5/5