I loved this poem, it is nice to see that there is some chance for us regular joe's with only our love to give. One critisism is that perhaps it could have benifited from a stronger rythmic structure.
much love
Aaron (remo) xxx

Aww that was such a sweet poem...
It's so true and I think all reltionships should be based on the love...not the expense...

Jen

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Awww. That was sooo good! It was one of those poems that you just had to keep reading to find out what happens. Really good. I loved it!! 5/5

`taleeee

P.S I know I used your name in the poem tehe, Thats my now ex best friends name lol

Hey this is such a sweet poem! i wish sum1 wud knock mi dore as well n make make mi life happi! well bt he shud hav everythin elese as well! lol1 gr8 poem! keep up the wonerful work! hope now i'v paid off 4 forgetin da script! but the comments are real!

This is a great piece i can relate to it so much like no matter who knocks at my door theres one one man in my life who can bring a tru smile to my face.

great work hun

gema xoxoxo

I love this poem... normally i dont fall in love with poems that dont rhyme... because sometimes the flow screws up in my head when they dont rhyme... but this one was great... and the flow was great

"There is a small sound
Being repeated over and over
Quite a normal sound
That is disturbing the peace.." I love the lines... they just appeal to me... and i dont know why... this poem its awesome... keep it up -Jen- 5/5

Aww this is really good. theres emotion in it thats why i like it. and i can kind of relate to it. wonderful work. keep writing 5/5

It's nice to see some people stay faithful and true to their heart no matter what is being handled to them

Wow, i havent read a happy poem in a while lol! this was great. all your poems are fantastic so im gonna add you too my favourites ( you are very lucky lol) xxxxx

Wow, i havent read a happy poem in a while lol! this was great. all your poems are fantastic so im gonna add you too my favourites ( you are very lucky lol) xxxxx

Omg i loved this, this was brilliant
i've neva read anything lyk this. it was actually the title that caught my attention so keep it up love dia mwaz xoxo
5/5

Awww!! That was cute. I loved it. The flow and rythym was amzing and it works well. I loved the reapeating of it and how she waved off all them. It was adorabale. :)

Amazing! Truly Amazing! This explains me in so many ways.. Thank you os much for your comments on my poems, they mean a lot to me and I really appreciate them =)

I completely agree with you about the fact that it seems as if I was writing about you, for it seems as if you are writing about me as well! It's really nice to have someone out there who knows where you're coming from ;D

Great job on this poem... one of my new faves!!!

Very nicely written
different and good write
5/5 again

love
amy

Once again your rhythm pulled me along making me want to read on and on, I dreaded the end cuz I loved the poem 5/5 great job seriously
Loved It
...mia...

I really liked it, good job