I saw this in the forums...I think...man what can I say!?!?!? I'm speechless!!! I love it!! I love the idea!!!! -- when I read what you wrote I didn't understand but after reading this I understand...

You did it perfectly!!! I can't even describe how I felt reading that!! WONDERFUL DARIEN!!! ;)

Darien that is so adorable!!!!! AWWWW! I'm all warm and fuzzy now! I can't wait to meet to her, you guys must be so cute. It's a wonderful, enderaing and romantic poem. !!Amour,
Kim

Darien... This is so heart warming and delicious! Your words are tantilising. I love every part of this poem. So much I read it more than 5 times. You've created a masterpiece here my friend! Well done.

Beautiful Darien.....just beautiful

Cute poem! I really liked it! great job! *5*

**meggie**

Omg yay. It kept me logged in this time. =D

And I liked this poem very muchly! It was so sweet. And the last line really put the cherry on top. Awesome job again! 5/5

.x.TaLeEe.x.

Aww.. that was so sweet! i really loved it.. it had good imagery, a nice flow, and used great language and descriptions! great write! 5/5

Aww.. that was so sweet! i really loved it.. it had good imagery, a nice flow, and used great language and descriptions! great write! 5/5

Wow thats beautiful

Super Acrostic Darien! Not forced but flows real well. I like the Acrostic poem style and might try it soon. Thanks for the idea. Thanks for commenting on my changing the world poem.
The Tie Guy

Very sweet poem darien, i loved it
there's not much left to say except that you are an excellent poet and i like to read all of your work!

5/5

~StefQ

This poem was really really good! 5/5 Keep up the good work!

-Stephanie-

This one is lovely...I love how you took a boring form like an acrostic and gave it a life of its own. I gave a {5/5}

[PygmyPuff]

4/5 due to the fact that the rym was good and stong, in my opinion 5 and 6 lines were little weak, i can see the piont of the poem. Very good

I enjoyed reading it. Even though it was short, it still was very good! The flow and rhyme were excelent. I love the topic. Great job! 5/5

I wish that would happen to me, but hey you never know. You got the point across and i loved the peom, tis one of the best acrostic poems i have read.

Shawn,

First off I want to say that I thought it was really creative to have somebody's name for thepoem instead of using the title letters. It was really different and unique.

Your first sentence had the work 'like' in it which normally I think can make a poem feel cheap but you pulled it off well by adding more words after stars. That brought more of a beautiful effect to your poem.

Your third and fourth sentences brough a magical/spiritual feeling to the poem. I think it was your most vivid piece of imagery. It was different and I really like how these lines stood out the most.

Night time calls for a prayer,
The one I made this year.

I really didn't think much of this part. It just didn't feel worded right even though the meaning fit well. But that can be just me.

Your final sentences were done well and was even more intense by putting that small explaination of why you chose the title but used her name.

Overall a well thought out poem that seemed to come from the heart.

Aww, I adore this poem. =) Great idea with the acrostic! Keep up the great work. =)

I love your poems, it is real awesome.

This was excellent! I love how you chose to do a specific style, and had no problem with rhyming or forced words, it was very well put together and was such a pleasure to read. Keep it up! 5/5