Your poem was really good. No one ever thinks of those things when someone drops out. I liked how you turned it around. You're a really good writer, keep it up.

Omg this poem is magnifecent...It flows and has such a touching theme!

[PygmyPuff]

Brilliant poem, i really love this series you're doing, it's so insightfull and thought provoking. i especially loved this line:

the school was their haven for lies.

i don't know why i like that line so much, but it really stood out to me.

fab poem, can't wait for the others.

xXx

Powerful message! Your ability to put yourself in someone elses mind set and write from their POV is brilliant.
You have really touched on many reasons why kids quit school, it's not always because they are lazy.
This is quite eye opening and something many people need to read. It could really make a difference.
Take care and keep it up~Holly

I really like your series. (obsessing the negative a bit though, aren't there any 'happy' people in this school?). I know a few kids who dropped out of highschool. this one guy I know though, I think he'll do alright.

Thats so sad you had a hard time at skool
but life isnt at skool and you can make the most of yourself outta skool ok!!

your poems are deep and meaningful
i loved it though it was very sad
5/5

lana

Wow.. this is a great poem.. i like how you say it was your only choice and people didnt understnad that.. also you were very descritpive .. you choose your words carefully and its clear.. it really helps bring your peotry to life.. again another flawless poem