Comments : Ode to My Old Man

  • 11 years ago

    by Natalie

    Awwww! That was so cute!! I'm gonna cry cause it's that cute. You did so good on this one. It flowed really well and everything tehe. Awesome job! 5/5

    `Taleee. xx.

  • 11 years ago

    by firexflys

    That was sooo sweet im sure your dad would love that very much keep up the good work. 5.5

  • 11 years ago

    by Sean Allen

    Great rhyming, and very touching. I could feel the solid rhythm all the way through. No critique on this one.

  • 11 years ago

    by Simon Hayes

    What a beautiful, perfectly written poem for the man that matters most in anybody's life. A special poem for Father's day. Good work my friend ! :)

  • 11 years ago

    by Melissa S. Masucci

    Very cute. :)

  • 11 years ago

    by Kim

    Awww Darien this is such a wonderful poem. Beautifully written and so heartfelt. It makes me all happy inside to see what a great bond you guys have. (ps some day you'll come to NL and see exactly what it's like ;))
    Amour,
    Kim

  • 11 years ago

    by TinyDancer46

    This is the cutest dedication I have ever read! Wow Darien...you never cease to amaze me. I'm so glad that you and your dad have such a great relationship.

  • 11 years ago

    by Bill Turner

    Beautifully done. Very touching. Your heart and love shine through.

  • So nice! really great poem. your dad must be a great guy. i really liked this poem. are you going to give him this for fathers day? i think he might like that.

  • 11 years ago

    by ├Truely_Spoken┤

    Great Poem, I enjoyed reading it- so thanx
    When you have the chance, could you rate my poem “If I”
    Appreciated- Truly Spoken

  • 11 years ago

    by keep n touch

    Touching poem, perfect timing. did you show this to your dad?

  • 11 years ago

    by J Lau

    Lovely write. Such touching poem on a special day for your dad. Good write. 5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by Kaylee

    Beautiful father's day poem, actually capturing a feeling written in the words instead of a poem just telling you. I loved the rhyme scheme and the emotions comming from the poem.

  • 11 years ago

    by Nate

    Great poem Darien! Sounds like your father and you have a lot in common. You must have a great relationship too.
    Nate aka "The Tie Guy"

  • 11 years ago

    by johnnys_princess

    Wow what a great touching poem from a proud son your dad should be real proud of you this is excellent

  • 11 years ago

    by Jessica

    Awwwww!! darien that was soo sweet! i loved it.. the rhymes worked well, the emotion was flowing out, and it was just so perfect.. very very cute! excellent write! 5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by AnnMarie

    Excellent I bet your dad liked it! The flow was great no work neede here!lol

  • 11 years ago

    by Tormented

    AWWWWWWWW. tht was a great father's day poem. it flowed well, its very touching. n great rhyming...5/5
    Well umm Take care.
    xxx

  • 11 years ago

    by kelS;

    Awee! this is such a cute poem it is actually so good! you can tell that you put a lot of effort into it and that you actually wanted this to be a good one about you and your dad! nice worK!

  • 11 years ago

    by VYXSIN

    Omg you must really like your dad, it soooo cute, 5/5...