One Cut and Two, Old Cut and New.

by Tina Carr AKA Snickers   Jul 5, 2006


She walked wearing a shirt that covered her chest,
She wore bands and bracelets to cover the rest.
She covered her legs, and she covered her neck.
Underneath of the clothes she was a horrible wreck.
She went home everyday to relieve all the stress.
The scars are one reason for the modest dress.
She cut and she cut and didnt wish to stop soon.
She cut at seven o'clock, eight o'clock, and at noon.
She slit once for her mom, and once for her dad.
She slit once for the happiness that she never had.
She may have cut once for you-
One cut & two, old cuts & new.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Hear You Me

    Absolute work of art! its SO original, its like a breath of fresh air to read something that noones ever written before. really gets the point across too, its bitter but really sad

  • 16 years ago

    by mimzy

    Moving poem

  • 17 years ago

    by ~*Sachi*~

    This one was beautiful!!!!
    i like how you said, "She may have cut once for you-"
    it was sooooo moving . . . i dunno, i just liked it!
    well done!
    5/5!

    and thanx for your comments! much appreciated!

  • 17 years ago

    by ShadowedPhoenix

    Very well written and descriptive, i just felt it ended unfinished, I think add to a little more, like the reason she cuts, what her mom did or her dad. Give the poem a sense of closure! But you're amazingly talented

  • 17 years ago

    by lonely princess

    Its a great poem, i dont know if your a selfharmer, but i am and let me say you got it all right babe! keep it up xx

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