I am truely speachless, ohhh wow hunni....You have done it again, written a poem that was so heartfelt, so full of pain and depth and just soooo so sad....My heart cries for you and I honestly feel you pain...This was so beautiful in a sad way!!! You know I am always here for you hunni, always!!

Love you - Sabrina

Wow, that was beautiful and amazing...just wow...Keep up your great work.

That was really good......I liked the ending the best,
"Jumped into the depths of hell
When you left for someone new"
It parallels well with the beginning.

Angel, what a spectacular poem. I hurt for you. I felt it too. I have been there. Poetry eases the hurt mends the soul. I added you to my favorites

When I read that poem I really understood it.. It's like your heart is crying.. I've had a situation like this before.

Nice poem....i can feel your pain.....great job!

I like ur poems!!! Oh, it touched my heart......a very fabulous one!!!

Good poem!good way of writeing1i like it...keep writeing 5/5

That was such a good poem!! keep up the good work!! i really like the way it flowed!

Wow thats sooo sad..very well written though!

Gah!

Incredible awesome!

Haha, I don't know what else to say...

No suggestions, just awesome.

Haha

Love
Tina
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Ahh! that was really good! sad tho but awseome! kkeep it up
love always ALi

"Brought up the flames
Sheltered your heart from the cold"

aMaZiNg!.. ^^,

"Jumped into the depths of hell
When you left for someone new"

pRfeCt eNdiNg..
gReaT jOb.. ^^,