Comments : Warm And Safe

  • 11 years ago

    by Nelle

    Awwwwwwwwwww that was soooo sweet, i can definitely relate to this alot! you're a great great writer babe...if i havent told you enough times yet lol! I love all of your poems..they all tell a great story! 5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by CourtneyLouxxx

    U have so much talent your r a truely amazing writer, i hope u get these seen by some publisheer or someone soon xoxo bye bye

  • 11 years ago

    by dora

    U have a way with words. u word every word so beautfully l0l =p that was great l0ved it all. keep em cming. a very touching piece xx

  • 11 years ago

    by J Lau

    Wow... I can feel how in love you are and how lucky you are to have found the one you love. Great write. 5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by Arcane Blondie

    Beautifully written! Your word choice is perfect and you did an amazing job with the flow-It can be hard with such long lines---I love the rhyme-It really made the poem that much better-- The imagery in it and the descriptions made the poem extremely ''wow''-- Great write! I enjoyed reading it :-)

    5/5 Keep it up!

  • 11 years ago

    by Melissa S. Masucci

    Instead of "never another" at the end of the second line in the last stanza, I'd suggest "never any other". It adds another syllable that I think the line is missing. Just my personal opinion though, ignore it at your will. :)

  • 11 years ago

    by Tormented

    Loved it!

  • 11 years ago

    by Brittney Follett

    I loved every word of this! It was really sweet, well done! 5/5 Keep up the great work!

  • 11 years ago

    by goddess-glamourpuss

    Lovely poem. Great rhymes that flowed well. Such sweet sentiment radiates through your words that this poem leaves me with a warm and fuzzy feeling.
    Wonderful writer.

  • 11 years ago

    by Sole

    Amazing poetry. That is really very impressive. I like the long lines, they really make the poem effective. Well penned.

    Peace. [Sole]

  • 11 years ago

    by Jackie Marie

    That was adorable hunn. I love it. I shall read it to my boyfriend later on. He will like it too. It reminds me of him and I. Excellent job. It is a great poem that describes two people in love. :)

    >black&&blue

  • 11 years ago

    by LockedInEternity

    Wow...it was a Nice Read...my favourite lines are "I'll always feel blessed that you had come into my life,
    Cause you know how to keep me warm & safe; out of strife."..these lines were just soo perfect =D=D

  • 11 years ago

    by Goran Rahim

    Like always your poems are so great.
    you have great words

  • 11 years ago

    by Razorblade

    This was a good poem, I enjoyed reading it. It was really cute!

    -Taylor

  • 11 years ago

    by xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

    Nice poem... It had excellent flow and was nicely written. Great job.

    xDarkSuicidex 5.5

  • 11 years ago

    by twisted reality

    Oh! That is SO cute! Lol. I love how passionate you were about wording the poem. Very well done yet again. xoxo

    ¤ Samantha ¤

  • 11 years ago

    by Jyoti Rawat

    Wowwwwwwwwwwwww
    very romantic

  • 11 years ago

    by Luba

    Woah ! this is an amazing poem ! You've got some great skill :) Keep it up !

  • 11 years ago

    by Knee

    Wonderful! absolutely wonderful!
    this poem has something to do with me..I can relate to this one. every line and every stanza..except the part about kissing.lol, hvn't got my first kiss yet =P

    very sweet work honey. I love reading your poems esp your love poems,...they're full of emotions and they appeal to me..I'm known as miss emotional,hehe!

    I love the poem honey. keep up your love poems!hehe
    Love You
    NemO xxxxxxxx

  • 11 years ago

    by Ebone

    I like very good way of expressing yourself