Comments : My Angels

  • 11 years ago

    by Darien

    That was such a sweet poem for your friends. I would have to say, I would call my friends angels too. They are amazing. Wonderful poem.

  • 11 years ago

    by goddess-glamourpuss

    Wonderfull poem. It really sums up the value of true friends and is a lovely way to show how much you think of them and value their friendship.
    Nice.

  • 11 years ago

    by Ashley

    Awww. Good poem Sammy. :) Hope you write some better one's.

  • 11 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    I believe every friend you have in life is an angel so this poem was very inspiring to me.
    It was sweet and obviously straight from the heart, i think it was very well penned, good flow and nice rhyming, keep it up
    xxxxxxx

  • 11 years ago

    by Heather

    It was a great poem about friendship, I loved it. I think you are an excellent writer and I look forward to reading some of your other peoms.
    5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by AnnMarie

    This was definatley another great poem! five 5 girl it was awesome and so very true!

    great job
    -AnnMarie

  • 11 years ago

    by Biscuit

    Great idea and a nice metaphor, though the rhyming seems a bit forced in places.

    -biscuit-

  • 11 years ago

    by xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

    Not like a bodyguard, who has a fee.
    But someone who does it out of their own free will.
    It's always a good thing to not have a monthly bill.
    [This seemed to take away from the poem for me.. I just didn't like it, sorry]
    But I did love the poem.. ESPICALLY the last few lines... That was a gorgeous twist to a beautiful poem. Great job.

    xDarkSuicidex 5.5

  • 11 years ago

    by Tormented

    AWWWW... thats soo sweet...i try writing for my friends but unfortunately i suck at it lol. but this poem was a good one!!Specially the ending!!5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by LockedInEternity

    OOOOO...5/5...this was such a cute friend poem!!!!I enjoyed it greatly...Comparing friends to Angels was ingenius...i loved that!!!and the first stanza was awesome and undoubtably my favourite.
    "I talk about my "angels" a lot.
    Some people ask me, "How many you got?"
    I answer, "It's not how many of them there are,
    But without them I couldn't get very far."
    Amazing!!!

  • 11 years ago

    by DeadlyObsession

    Beautiful.
    in need of another wing. like i said before im here for you

  • 11 years ago

    by ♥?♥

    GREAT POEM

  • 11 years ago

    by Megann Lee

    Yay!! I loved this one. A happier poem. Brought my mood up. And put a smile on my face. Very well written. I enjoyed it.

  • 11 years ago

    by -The-Undying-

    All of my angels are the ones who tend,
    To come in the form of a very good friend.

    I believe that everyone has atleast one angel... even the devil!

  • 11 years ago

    by A Fallen Angel

    So awesome. and i would love to have such sweet angels of my own but alas they have left me alone.... but oh well. ur poem like the rest is freaking amazing and i hope you continue on with ur wrting.. you are great 5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by Misstress

    Now this was pretty pretty nice.
    Good work!
    An angel in you are far too rare.
    Keep on writing on what u feel and like

    God Bless!

  • 11 years ago

    by X2892

    Very good but i like ur other ones better

  • 11 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    WOW...i thought this one was very sweet.

  • 11 years ago

    by Bridgette

    Aww.. i love this poem. It definitely reminds me of some of my bestest friends. I loved it. The flow and rhythm of it was really good and the whole poem was just beautiful. Great job on this! 5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by Robie Lincer

    Ya ya ya!!! this poem was great!!!
    good friends are our angels that is true!!!

    Keep up the good work