Awww. Good poem Sammy. :) Hope you write some better one's.
11 years ago
by Tara Kay
I believe every friend you have in life is an angel so this poem was very inspiring to me.
It was sweet and obviously straight from the heart, i think it was very well penned, good flow and nice rhyming, keep it up
Not like a bodyguard, who has a fee.
But someone who does it out of their own free will.
It's always a good thing to not have a monthly bill.
[This seemed to take away from the poem for me.. I just didn't like it, sorry]
But I did love the poem.. ESPICALLY the last few lines... That was a gorgeous twist to a beautiful poem. Great job.
OOOOO...5/5...this was such a cute friend poem!!!!I enjoyed it greatly...Comparing friends to Angels was ingenius...i loved that!!!and the first stanza was awesome and undoubtably my favourite.
"I talk about my "angels" a lot.
Some people ask me, "How many you got?"
I answer, "It's not how many of them there are,
But without them I couldn't get very far."
So awesome. and i would love to have such sweet angels of my own but alas they have left me alone.... but oh well. ur poem like the rest is freaking amazing and i hope you continue on with ur wrting.. you are great 5/5