Comments : Choice Of Death!

  • 11 years ago

    by Lady Nik

    I like this it is sort of like a story, i like how you wrote that. it's deep. i have a new poem and it would mean so much to me if you read it and told me what you think. it's called Evanescent. thanx so much Shanik B

  • 11 years ago

    by Holly

    Wow that was wicked good i am yea wow dunno wut to say but wicked good job 5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by Nadan

    I LOOOOOOOVE this poem!!!!

  • 11 years ago

    by 000

    I love this!!

  • 11 years ago

    by donna

    A great imaginitive poem.. excellent read 5/5 xx

  • 11 years ago

    by The Poetic Child

    That was Dammmm** Good
    You like freestyles and raps?
    if you do, i got some if you look at some more of my poetry After the To You Katie part..some of those are all freestyles and raps..
    i loved it
    My only Critique i can give
    was it was a little too long
    if you plan on making a long poem
    Make a Series Like i do
    Make it like a season on tv,
    have ppl astounded on the end
    and just want to read more
    and cant wait to read the next
    attracts a lot of viewers
    Good job
    Heartfelt
    sad
    Excellent Rhymes
    keep up the great work
    5/5
    ~MF~

  • 11 years ago

    by RainbowSlider

    Wow. That was awesome especially since it was long. Thanks for sharing. It was beautiful.

  • 11 years ago

    by Faye

    Wow that was intense...but very good. I really liked it. Great job.

  • 11 years ago

    by Valisaren

    O.o; That is a long poem, but it's very good! I give you a 5.

  • 11 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    Wow that poem captivated me ..very interesting

  • Wow...I don't know what to say..This is so sad..But very very good..Wonderful job..5/5...Keep up the great work...
    Crystal

  • 11 years ago

    by XDyingx-In-xVeinX

    I loved this poem, you write excellent work. thanx for commenting me. 5/5*

  • 11 years ago

    by TILLmyLASTtearFALLS

    AwW, i dont know what to say...that poem was so dark and heartbreaking! Great work,indeed.You wrote an awesome poem, keep it up! 5/5
    Best wishes,

    TILLmyLASTtearFALLS

  • 11 years ago

    by The_Dooksta

    Nice poem! so awesome! it was a bit long and i got bit distracted but heaps good and good use of words i had a very good image in my head...thnx for the comment on my poem.. wish you well on future poems.. :P :D :P

  • 11 years ago

    by NothingGoldCanStay

    Excellent poem. 5.

  • 11 years ago

    by doralinda

    That is amaizing....i love it

  • 11 years ago

    by Deana

    It was long but I was so into the story the length didn`t bother me at all. For someone so young you really think deep, very good. look forward to more. hope you will tell me what you think of mine.

  • 11 years ago

    by Bryan Berry

    ...wh0a. that's crazy. great narrative ^.^ good job on the rhyme scheme and flow

  • 11 years ago

    by Tom Waltham

    Hey thanks for your comments on my poem...i really loved this poem, its so deep and moving and you feel as if it is actually happening or as if your actually there...keep it up, your a seriously good poet! xxx

  • 11 years ago

    by xxmichaelxx

    Wow i never seen this style before. all of them have rhymes! i can feel that DRAMA wen u have to decide who u want to save. it's a long poem and it's really good!

    Adrian