Thin Air

by Karen Simpson   Jul 22, 2006


I dont want to look
But I think Im falling
I can tell Ive gone past
Just merely crawling

The ground beneath me
Turned to thin air
My footing Ive lost
Trying not to care

But Im starting to fall
I can feel myself slipping
Im falling from my place
At the air I keep gripping

This time I know Ive lost
Nothing left to hold on to
I hope theres another chance
Something left for me to do

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  • 17 years ago

    by Sarah

    Mmmmm i like it. i think life too complicated and we should just die or something >.> but sadly i dont think our Daddy would aprove of that (or let us into heaven) so keep on plodding. btw i love the phrase "thin air" it makes me think of a calm but bad situation.

  • 17 years ago

    by nicole

    Very nice, ooo your hair looks so cute! :p sorry, random :p

    Jesus bless you*

    ~nicole.

  • 17 years ago

    by sчиτнєτι¢__x.

    My footing Ive lost
    [I thought you could maybe say 'My feet I have lost' ..It might sound abit better.]

    This was a good poem though, I can relate too. Keep it up!

    Natalie``

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