Comments : Bleeding Mascara

  • 11 years ago

    by Samantha Hollywood

    Talee --
    This was REALLY great! Wow, just, wow. I really liked the repitition of the last two lines of each stanza -- it added a cool effect. Not to mention, the title was very catchy. I think its probably one of the best poems I`ve read on this site, WONDERFUL job! 5/5

    Love Much,
    Samantha Hollywood

  • 11 years ago

    by Amber Parker

    Okay, I'm really new so I'm not sure exactly what to say, but I really loved this poem... it's honest, dark and it really seems to draw you in. It's great.

  • 11 years ago

    by heartbroken247

    This is a very deep poem and i really enjoyed this one as well, you are very talented, any suggestions to help me along the way in my poem writing?

  • 11 years ago

    by Hey Brittknee

    Wow that is an amazing poem, truley amazing, has to be some of my new favorite poems~keep up the good work~brittany

  • 11 years ago

    by A Broken Bleeding Soul

    Wow... I really like this one. I can really imagine it as a song. Great job 5/5

    ~ Tina

  • 11 years ago

    by Sorefromreality

    Wut a creative way to write such a poem...mascara ....such a simple object, but can be used in a powerful piece of work. great job...
    love ya lots,
    sore

  • 11 years ago

    by Tormented

    WOW!!!!
    This is GREAT. im like blown away!!!
    Excellent indeed
    5/5

    Torm

  • 11 years ago

    by Nada

    Very descriptive, i like it

  • 11 years ago

    by Ya Ya

    I really loved this poem. It was like I could feel how you feel as I read every word. I loved how you ended it.
    nice job

  • 11 years ago

    by Brooke Bowman

    Wow I could see that all happening in my head.....5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by Ana

    That is an amazing poem. I wish I could write like you, but unfortunately I haven't experienced nearly as much as you obviously have and I'm not going to try and understand either.

    Overall, 5/5 poem written to perfection'!

  • 11 years ago

    by Sarah Ann

    Wow Nat! Now that I've read this I realize how much I miss reading your wonderful poetry. Sorry for not commenting lately, I've been quite busy. This poem was so amazing, especially the title, I think it's brilliant. It was so unique and beautiful because you turned a simple and unusual poetry topic into a masterpiece of power. Keep up your excellent work! 5/5 xxx

  • 11 years ago

    by Bethany

    Great poem! Can really relate! Keep up the great writing

  • 11 years ago

    by Avellana

    Her lips are shaking from the words that she can't say,
    With smeared lipstick on her face that won't wash away.

    O_o

    This is my favourite.
    xxx

  • 11 years ago

    by Megann Lee

    I have to say. I am a huge fan of Dark poems. They are probabely one of my favorite types of poems. So I really loved this and how you wrote it, and the wording as usual.

  • 11 years ago

    by Jessica

    Aww, wow, taleee.. that was amazing hun.. and so sad.. wow.. the descriptions were stunning, they literally left me speechless.. the flow is perfect and i love the repitition of the last two lines in each stanza.. ily, hunny! 5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by Tammie

    I saw your comment on my poem of the same name, and decided i'd come to read yours. =] It's amazing how two people can write a poem, with the same title, and yet each are so different. You did an excellent job, such emotion and the story you told through the poem is well written. i love how the last two lines are repeticious, and it always works. My favorite line is:

    Her lips are shaking from the words that she can't say.

    I love everything about this poem! =]
    5/5 Definately.

  • 10 years ago

    by Stephanie Naylor

    Keep up the good work

  • 10 years ago

    by musiqlover015

    Wow... this was nice