Talee --
This was REALLY great! Wow, just, wow. I really liked the repitition of the last two lines of each stanza -- it added a cool effect. Not to mention, the title was very catchy. I think its probably one of the best poems I`ve read on this site, WONDERFUL job! 5/5

Love Much,
Samantha Hollywood

Okay, I'm really new so I'm not sure exactly what to say, but I really loved this poem... it's honest, dark and it really seems to draw you in. It's great.

This is a very deep poem and i really enjoyed this one as well, you are very talented, any suggestions to help me along the way in my poem writing?

Wow that is an amazing poem, truley amazing, has to be some of my new favorite poems~keep up the good work~brittany

Wow... I really like this one. I can really imagine it as a song. Great job 5/5

~ Tina

Wut a creative way to write such a poem...mascara ....such a simple object, but can be used in a powerful piece of work. great job...
love ya lots,
sore

WOW!!!!
This is GREAT. im like blown away!!!
Excellent indeed
5/5

Torm

Very descriptive, i like it

I really loved this poem. It was like I could feel how you feel as I read every word. I loved how you ended it.
nice job

Wow I could see that all happening in my head.....5/5

That is an amazing poem. I wish I could write like you, but unfortunately I haven't experienced nearly as much as you obviously have and I'm not going to try and understand either.

Overall, 5/5 poem written to perfection'!

Wow Nat! Now that I've read this I realize how much I miss reading your wonderful poetry. Sorry for not commenting lately, I've been quite busy. This poem was so amazing, especially the title, I think it's brilliant. It was so unique and beautiful because you turned a simple and unusual poetry topic into a masterpiece of power. Keep up your excellent work! 5/5 xxx

Great poem! Can really relate! Keep up the great writing

Her lips are shaking from the words that she can't say,
With smeared lipstick on her face that won't wash away.

O_o

This is my favourite.
xxx

I have to say. I am a huge fan of Dark poems. They are probabely one of my favorite types of poems. So I really loved this and how you wrote it, and the wording as usual.

Aww, wow, taleee.. that was amazing hun.. and so sad.. wow.. the descriptions were stunning, they literally left me speechless.. the flow is perfect and i love the repitition of the last two lines in each stanza.. ily, hunny! 5/5

I saw your comment on my poem of the same name, and decided i'd come to read yours. =] It's amazing how two people can write a poem, with the same title, and yet each are so different. You did an excellent job, such emotion and the story you told through the poem is well written. i love how the last two lines are repeticious, and it always works. My favorite line is:

Her lips are shaking from the words that she can't say.

I love everything about this poem! =]
5/5 Definately.

Keep up the good work

Wow... this was nice