No More

by Katie Bug :)   Jul 23, 2006


There's so much to think of
as i lie here at night
all of these emotions,
I'm trying to fight

i cannot cry anymore
for my eyes have dried out
my voice is now gone
so i cannot shout

everything's locked up
way deep down
it's becoming too much
i think I'm gunna drown

there's only one way
to deal with this pain
and that's to go to sleep
and never wake up again

the gun's to my head
NOW what should i do?
should i back down?
or should i pull through?

my body has now
finally met my head
'cause since he said goodbye
i've been emotionally dead.

--Katie

(i just got out of a year long relationship)

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  • 17 years ago

    by Bridgette

    Wow.. I know exactly what you are going through. I just got out of a two year (almost) relationship a while ago & I absolutely loved your poem. Especially the last stanza about being "emotionally dead".. Amazing job on this! 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by locky

    Great poem u are very tallented

  • 17 years ago

    by shae r

    Hey there,
    many thanks for your comment it made my day! this is a brilliant poem and you were right i did enjoy it! you have amazing tallent.
    keep writing.
    much love xo
    Shae Radford ღ

  • 17 years ago

    by Tammie

    I'm sorry about what happened. The poem was wonderful. You wrote your emotions clearly, and it flowed very well. I love the ending, about being emotionally dead, not physically. Very well thought out and written. Keep up the great work! You have talent hun. =] 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Gem

    I told you i'd come find your poem

    It was very emotive and heart felt
    You did a wonderful job in expressing yourself
    I know things will get better soon for you!
    5/5
    *Gem*