Comments : Love is....

  • 11 years ago

    by xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

    Make you he know that you really do care,
    [I think you meant 'sure' in there]
    and that you will never play
    [This was a poor line...Too overly used with every other poem.]
    to some love is a dream,
    [This line was perfect.]

    In other words, I enjoyed the poem. Trying to write a love poem for me is extremely hard and never turns out to what I'm feeling.. Now I know why. Great job.

    xDarkSuicidex 5.5

  • 11 years ago

    by End Of Eternity

    Hey, this is really good and so true...great write indeed
    very deep thoughts expressed

    all the best and take care
    5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by Mike

    I liked the emotions in the poem.

    I thought it was well written

  • 11 years ago

    by Jemma

    Wow. well that is incredible. Again, not at asll what i expected from it. It really makes you think. it defines love in a way no one else i have seen has and overall it's bloody good.

    Jem

  • 11 years ago

    by Gary Jurechka

    This is a unique take on love and life-very emotional and eloquently expressed.As criticism-stanza #4 the last line seems awkward, especially since you already used the rhyme 'play', perhaps something like 'and that you will always stay'-just a thought.Stanzas 1, 3, 5, 6, & 7 are truly outstanding-very well written, but it is the meaning and the emotion that really shine through.Really, a great piece.Very heartfelt and beautiful.A realistic yet emotional look at love.

    Gary J

  • 11 years ago

    by coco

    I really really like this poem...like I felt some of the stuff you were saying

  • 11 years ago

    by Annissha

    I loved that poem! it waz so damn real and true, unlike some otha pplz they dont make since at all. i hope u keep writing cuz ur really good!
    much luv from yo gurl
    ~!*Peachez*!~

  • 11 years ago

    by RainbowSlider

    I liked trying to read the poem. :)

  • 11 years ago

    by Kimberly Anne

    Heyy, well just returning the favor.
    you're poem speaks the truth. love it!

    --

  • 11 years ago

    by herewithme

    That is soooooooooo awesome!! i LOVE it *haha*
    thanks so much for the comment!
    really well written, keep it up!
    kat
    xox

  • 11 years ago

    by Chrissie

    Awesome poem..thanks for the comment on my poem, love chrissie xxx

  • 11 years ago

    by heartbroken247

    I really could relate to this poem and i would like to say nice work, you do have talent....

  • 11 years ago

    by Ana

    Interesting opinion on what love is. I really like it because it includes all views on what love is and not just the views of someone in love or out of love. Once again, amazing! :D

  • 11 years ago

    by EthaniaShea

    Good poem. God's love is true love & humans can either love or have true love that has been handed down to us by God.

  • 11 years ago

    by daretolive

    Really good, keep it up.:) later.

  • 11 years ago

    by Philip

    Marvelous Poemm. Hahah I mean Nice Poem person. Just sayingg. Okaybye.

  • 11 years ago

    by ohmylove

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    thats like really good.
    =]]

  • 11 years ago

    by ohmylove

    Ohh wow..
    thats like really good.
    =]]

  • 11 years ago

    by ohmylove

    Ohh wow..
    thats like really good.
    =]]

  • 11 years ago

    by Hamburger-Herm

    Lovely you have a tallent