Ohh, I remember when I had to graduate. It was one of the saddest things I had to go through. Everyone I knew was leaving. This definitely brought back some good memories. Thanks for a great read, and good luck in the future :)
Awww.. this was very sweet and sad at the same time.. it was oozing emotion and i loved the questions in parenthesies.. it flowed well and all the rhymes worked well.. hope you see your friends soon! nice job! 5/5
Awwwwwww I loved this, it was sweet but sad...it was filled with great great emotions...I can relate to this, as i'm sure many ppl can...It's a horrible feeling when ppl are graduating or if you are leaving yourself...It's so sad! But it brings better things in the future...if your lucky! lol but i loved this, it was great 5/5
I loved this. I gave it a 5/5 because of the moral and such ;; I didn`t dock you for mistakes, so you`re lucky this round. =D
First of all, "cherish" is spelled like that, not like "charish".
The flow worked out well, but the rhyming changed throughout the poem. Thats okay, thought. =D Maybe it was unintentional rhyming, that happens a lot.
I REALLY liked the parentheses idea ;; it added a nice twist. And it worked out so well! Wonderful job. Really an improvement, i`m impressed.
""Those were the days," I'd hear my parents say.
Charish their years...each and everyday "
Absouletly loved those lines. I really loved this poem, it really hit home. I just left my middle school and i know it's not the same as graduation, but it's still hard. This poem captured the feelings of this situation, and i like how you added a little bit of personality to it. Great work.