Comments : Graduation

  • 11 years ago

    by goddess-glamourpuss

    Loved it. Can relate to that feeling so well. I loved the flow it was so smooth and cheery with just a little twinge of sadness.
    Keep 'em coming sweetie

  • 11 years ago

    by Darien

    Ohh, I remember when I had to graduate. It was one of the saddest things I had to go through. Everyone I knew was leaving. This definitely brought back some good memories. Thanks for a great read, and good luck in the future :)

  • 11 years ago

    by Jessica

    Awww.. this was very sweet and sad at the same time.. it was oozing emotion and i loved the questions in parenthesies.. it flowed well and all the rhymes worked well.. hope you see your friends soon! nice job! 5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by Nelle

    Awwwwwww I loved this, it was sweet but sad...it was filled with great great emotions...I can relate to this, as i'm sure many ppl can...It's a horrible feeling when ppl are graduating or if you are leaving yourself...It's so sad! But it brings better things in the future...if your lucky! lol but i loved this, it was great 5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by Samantha Hollywood

    Sammy --
    I loved this. I gave it a 5/5 because of the moral and such ;; I didn`t dock you for mistakes, so you`re lucky this round. =D
    First of all, "cherish" is spelled like that, not like "charish".
    The flow worked out well, but the rhyming changed throughout the poem. Thats okay, thought. =D Maybe it was unintentional rhyming, that happens a lot.
    I REALLY liked the parentheses idea ;; it added a nice twist. And it worked out so well! Wonderful job. Really an improvement, i`m impressed.

    Love Much,
    Samantha Hollywood

  • 11 years ago

    by Tainted Beauty

    ""Those were the days," I'd hear my parents say.
    Charish their years...each and everyday "

    Absouletly loved those lines. I really loved this poem, it really hit home. I just left my middle school and i know it's not the same as graduation, but it's still hard. This poem captured the feelings of this situation, and i like how you added a little bit of personality to it. Great work.

    --Steph

  • 11 years ago

    by xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

    If your white or black or green or blue eyed.
    ['Not at the beginning would make a lot more sense.]

    But I really liked this.. I'm only going into 10th grade though I'm planning to leave my after my 11th and I"m so scared my few friends will forget me... It spoke very strongly to me. Great job.

    xDarkSuicidex 5.5

  • 11 years ago

    by ~yOu EnVy Me ~

    I liked your poem but you wasn't on your topic. But it was a good poem.

  • 11 years ago

    by ♥?♥

    I LIKED IT..

  • 11 years ago

    by xxSilent Tearsxx

    This poem actually means a lot to me, well done.if you have time hit me back xoxo

  • 11 years ago

    by gabrielle.Xx

    Reaalllyy good

  • 11 years ago

    by Brittany Paige

    I like this poem alot.
    it makes me sad about graduating...
    but good job!
    hope to read from ya.
    bye!