It dosent seem real

by Nikki   Jul 31, 2006


You were young,
Death is near,
you were with us all a week ago,
seeing you smile,
hearing you laugh,
seeing your face,
made all of our days turn to Sunshine,
now that you're gone,
i don't think things will ever be the same,
i don't think this pain will ever go away,
all of us sit here in shock still,
as hours pass by,
we cry and weep,
but nothing will change,
nothing will bring you back,
you're gone for good,
And some of just sit here,
and think why,
did this happen to you??,
you were so young,
And while others,
are sad because the didn't even say good bye,
and all we have left are memories,
some bad or good,
but we will hold them in our hearts forever,
and some of us sit,
and wish we had gotten to know him a lot better,
we cant bring you back,
theirs nothing we can do,
but pray and hope that you are listening to the,
words that we say to you,
and hope that you're watching over us this very moment,
we miss you,
we love you,
we all wish that this didn't happen,
but god wanted another angel,
and it was you,
and now when ever i remember you..
i smile, and laugh,
and cry,

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  • 13 years ago

    by Lauren

    This poem has so much emotion and heart in it. I love this poem. To me it seemed you were writing through your emotions.

    Loved it

    Lauren

  • 14 years ago

    by Broken Masquerade

    I can relate to almost every word of this poem.. you expressed your emotions so well and it resulted in amazing poem..

    I love the ending of
    "and now when ever i remember you..
    i smile, and laugh,
    and cry,"
    I can relate to that so much... some of my memories of him can make me so happy.. just thinking about how amazing he was.. then other times i can just cry and cry cause thos same memories make me miss him just so much more...

    i'm sorry for your loss.. i'm dealing with similar emtoions at the moment and know exactly how you feel... well done though, you're a very talented writer.

    5/5 :)

  • 14 years ago

    by Em

    OMG, this is so sad. I'm sorry about this but as Roger Taylor sang 'one by one only the good die young.' 5/5, Em

  • 14 years ago

    by MERCY is never shown

    One of the guys i was closest too was murdered at seventeen i still haven't gotten over it this poem made me wanna cry but also think obout our good times and smile you did an amazing job bravo

  • 16 years ago

    by Danielle

    This was truely, emotionally, wonderful.
    when i started my senior year in high school, three of my good friends all passed away in all seperate accidents. it was so hard. and i know it is so hard to loose a friend. nothing can take that pain away, and you executed that beautifully.

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