Wow...I love this poem. It's great. Oh, but...sole should be soul and fought should be fight.
Otherwise, it's a beautiful piece! You've got some talent. Never lose that part of you!
~Asha

Wow! This is good and so true! I love it! Good job!

Wow! This is good and so true! I love it! Good job!

The first letter of each line should be a capital. but then I'm a traditionalist...

I'm afraid I don't agree with the sentiment of this poem at all. But for your age it is very spirited and upbeat, and a stark and happy contrast to the poem I read about depression.

In many ways it reminded me of my own early works, and in that I think that if you take on board the more honest criticism you will (hopefully) get on here, rather than just "hey wot a grt poem! plz rate mine!" you have the potential to be a very very good poet.

Stick at it. Work at it.

Dat is bomb g..GOOD LUCK in ur future poems

Dat is bomb g..GOOD LUCK in ur future poems

Things were said like they are..

Cleary.

I like it..at 4 a.m it made me think my life too..

Really, i decided I need to get some friends into my life.

Ur poem remind me from myself in ur age..not so long time ago, but it feels like forever have been gone..

I wrote poems like urs in finnish so so so much.

Keep going, id like to read all u have in ur heart.

I likes this one too.

I really like this one. its really good!

Short simple and sweet i loved it very insperational more people should have this kind of out look on life great poem

This one is so cool! I love it! Keep it up!

I liked what I assumed this poem was trying to tell the reader. Be yourself, express yourself, and be true to yourself because the longer that you deny you the harder it makes life and the longer you will miss out on the joys around you. I must admit though I didn't particularly like the way that it was presented. I think that it needed more metaphors because it makes it easier for the reader to relate if they don't have the idea of the poem right in front of their face, it gives the reader a much broader spectrum and with that more chances that they will appreciate it. I also think that this poem could have been presented a bit better if the word “You” wasn't viewed so often. It takes away from the message of the poem and it makes it harder for the reader to visualise what is happening. I think a little bit more practise and this poem will be amazing it just needs a bit more work.