I like it.

This was a graet poem! Does this come from real life stuff? If it does WOW! Well rate and comment!
{*LACEY*}

Aww..me likey. Is this a true to life poem? If it is then its really touching. wut happened with your dad or what?

Wow!! this is amazing.. it's a piece of work i can really relate to.. i love it!! just wanted to let you know..

Very deep and very cute. 5/5!

(cry...cry...cry) i can relate to it! you wrote it real well!

Narc xxx

Awww.... this is touching. its deep. i like it. its clearly stated and well written. great job :) and thank you for the comments

I really like this!!! i can really relate to what you said. i love the very last lines, they totally just popped out at me, great job!

Forever*Yours

Very deep and very emotional write. The rhyme was off in some places, but overall this was a good poem.

Peace, Joe

That was sad. I'm fortunate to have grown up with my father, but I really feel for people who don't have that pleasure.
This was a very emotional write, and well written. I will say though, on the third line it should be "you're hurt."
Thanks for sharing.

LAMP

wow this is very sad.. It breaks my heart to see people who either dont know their father or their father isn't nice to them. Lucky for me I'm very close with my dad we do everything together, but this poem makes me think of ppl who arent that lucky. I am so sorry that this had to happen to you. Bust just think of all the good things in your life, and its his loss for not knowing you. Nicely written. The short stanzas make the lines more direct and to the point very well done chosing it. Thanx for sharing, this with us.

A heartfelt piece, all the emotion was there. Yet, the flow was a bit choppy and the rhyming was very forced it felt like. And again, spelling errors. Check it out.

Not one of my favorites but still fantastic as always!
much love and many kisses,
bex

Awww...i like tht rainfall part..for some reason it made me go really sad but with a small smile weird eh?