Just You.

by kelS;   Oct 29, 2006


You.
I need.
that one thing.
that i need.

you.
I want.
that one thing.
that i want.

you.
I desire.
that one thing.
that i desire.

you.
I trust.
that one thing.
that i trust.

you.
I require.
that one thing.
that i require.

you.
I love.
that one thing.
that i love.

You.
I scare.
that one thing.
I am scared of.

Just You.

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  • 11 years ago

    by dollwithafrown

    I really liked this. It was pretty simplistic, but I enjoyed it. I also like how you turned it around from being very positive, to ending it on a negative. Nice work.

  • 11 years ago

    by Roses and lilys

    Very good poem. wish it had more to it.
    I liked it though. 5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    I have never seen this style before, but I enjoyed it alot.
    I don't know why it has been downvoted, I thought it was good.

  • 11 years ago

    by xxEvilAngelxx

    Really good! I like the style you wrote it in! Great job! Keep it up!