Comments : The Rose

  • 11 years ago

    by d4tGurL

    Why is it so hard to let go? i too do not know and can relate. letting go is so much easier then holding on...and yet impossible to do...nicely written :)

  • 11 years ago

    by Vonnie McHugh

    This very beautiful thank you

  • 11 years ago

    by Laura

    This poem is very well written and very understandable my friends have been stuck in these situations and theyve come to me for help.....

  • 10 years ago

    by Tammi

    Wow so true it is so hard to let go of someone you love so much I am going through it myself right now and as you said even on my death bed I will never let it go great line love it you are very talented kepp it up 5/5

  • 10 years ago

    by xXxDarkDreamerxXx

    Aww.....that was so cool...i havetn been able to write a poem about rose and this was was so cool.."the rose you gave me long ago
    i hold onto it still
    a love that was lost long ago
    a love for which i'd kill"
    this part was my fav..its awesome! keep it up! ur a great poet!

  • 10 years ago

    by morbid_luv_story

    Deep....and good

  • 10 years ago

    by Brittney Follett

    B-e-a-utiful. The only thing I think you could fix is:

    -Capitalize every letter in the beginning of each rhyme.

    -One stanza didn't flow correctly:

    i know i'll never let it go
    this rose composed of blood
    the more and more i miss you
    means the deeper the thorns go

    Maybe put:

    This rose composed of blood.
    I know I'll never let it go,
    The more and more I miss you,
    Means the deeper the thorns go.

    I know that go's rhyme twice, but it rhymes.

    Other than that, I LOVED IT! You really have a nack for writing poetry. Your rhyming was amazing. Great Job!

    5/5

  • 10 years ago

    by Anonymous Angel

    Hey,
    beautiful i have no other words for it, its very sweet and the flow is great (as usely)
    you really have talent;)
    kisses stephanie

  • 10 years ago

    by amber

    Its really good but idk maybe you could add a little more but otherwise good job. keep it up.

  • 10 years ago

    by Nicolle

    Another great poem do you write from personal experience? Keep it up

  • 10 years ago

    by Quiet One

    Very good poem! keep it up!

  • 9 years ago

    by Yumi

    Wow i really like ur poem...that is so cool. i can relate
    5/5
    -Yumi