Chance

by David   Nov 5, 2006


I got one chance,
One small glimmer of hope
To rekindle this perfect romance
So I can cope

With the ever building wall of disaster
With each day it growing faster.
That I can win over all
With you beside me to never let me fall.

I have to make things right.
So I say to you now,
Can you see it in my eyes
That I love you
Youre my number one prize

But I have to admit
That sometimes when you love them
but have no space to fit
that in the end you have to let them
Go

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  • 16 years ago

    by NinjaGirl

    Beautifully written though very sad and painful 5/5 love the way you expressed yourself/feelings in this poem

  • 16 years ago

    by Stephanie Naylor

    It was a beautiful poem with an underlying sadness to it, but you channeled the emotions very well

  • 17 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    This was so sad...yet such a beautiful write.
    The imagery you used was wonderful.
    I thought the flow was a little off in places but apart from that you did great job.

  • 17 years ago

    by Kaila

    Woah..intense! this was great nice job once again

  • 17 years ago

    by Cella Bella

    Aw this is kind of sad... but still good though. You write some of the sweetest poems. 5/5

    marcella

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