by Mizz Kayla
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Your an [[Amazing]] writter. |
by Tess
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Aww! Omgosh. That made me cry. I dont normally cry when it comes to your lovey dovey sweet mushy poems but OMGOSH! *hides face* So not teary eyed ;) Wow!!! Well keep it up!!! |
by dora
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This was also beautiful. great use of words in this one. beautifully written. xx |
by RACHELLE
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I like this poem |
by reality
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That was soo sweet... |
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Feelings that have been very nicely potrayed...great write indeed |
by ~SaD-T3aRs~
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I really like this poems your really good... |
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That is a really good poem |
by Mommy And Me
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Omg.. thats such an adorible poem.. so deep with meaning.. great work :) |
by jaime
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Your poem is great |
by Jenni Marie
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I enjoyed this, it was as always, very sweet. |
by Bryan
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This is a good poem joe, i love the ending, 5/5!!! |
by Kayla
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Awww! that is such a sweet poem. it's beautiful! nice work! Flow needs some work but not much. Imagery and word-choice was good also. 4/5 |
by Katie
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I love this poem its soo insipiring |
by isabel
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Absolutely beautiful... very emotional... |
by Pete
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Wow mate, the more i read the more i love your work. The emotion expressed here is amazing, the imagery works brilliantly with it. Overall very well written piece. |
by Ingrid
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Very beautiful poem indeed. I cannot point out the stanza I love best, they are all great! |
by gack60
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From reading this u can see that u write from the heart and not the head, its much easier for a poem to flow if it comes from within rather than making it up in ur head. |
by Melpomene
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This poem really warmed my heart. Such a sweetly expressed poem which I felt as though you put all your heart into it to write. The flow again was beautiful you have a way with writing poems where the words just come together to create something so simply beautiful. What more can I say then I truely enjoyed reading this poem. Well done on writing a gorgeous love poem which held so much meaning within every line. Talented I must say. ~Mel |
by browneyezz
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That was amazing, great job |