Wow mate, the more i read the more i love your work. The emotion expressed here is amazing, the imagery works brilliantly with it. Overall very well written piece.
Last stanza is by far the best for me.
Keep it up!
From reading this u can see that u write from the heart and not the head, its much easier for a poem to flow if it comes from within rather than making it up in ur head.
I love the feeling it portrays even tho it has no rhyming structure.
This poem really warmed my heart. Such a sweetly expressed poem which I felt as though you put all your heart into it to write. The flow again was beautiful you have a way with writing poems where the words just come together to create something so simply beautiful. What more can I say then I truely enjoyed reading this poem. Well done on writing a gorgeous love poem which held so much meaning within every line. Talented I must say. ~Mel