Comments : If you were...

  • 10 years ago

    by Mizz Kayla

    Your an [[Amazing]] writter.
    Your thoughts && feelings catch my eye.
    && I think its wonderful.
    Who ever these are about or are to
    They are very lucky to have someone like you.
    I love what you do.

  • 10 years ago

    by Tess

    Aww! Omgosh. That made me cry. I dont normally cry when it comes to your lovey dovey sweet mushy poems but OMGOSH! *hides face* So not teary eyed ;) Wow!!! Well keep it up!!!

  • 10 years ago

    by dora

    This was also beautiful. great use of words in this one. beautifully written. xx

  • 10 years ago

    by RACHELLE

    I like this poem

  • 10 years ago

    by reality

    That was soo sweet...

  • 10 years ago

    by End Of Eternity

    Feelings that have been very nicely potrayed...great write indeed

    all the best and take care

  • 10 years ago

    by ~SaD-T3aRs~

    I really like this poems your really good...

  • 10 years ago

    by lovin a man behind bars

    That is a really good poem

  • 10 years ago

    by Mommy And Me

    Omg.. thats such an adorible poem.. so deep with meaning.. great work :)

  • 10 years ago

    by jaime

    Your poem is great

  • 10 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    I enjoyed this, it was as always, very sweet.
    I thought the flow was off in just a couple of places but apart from that, you did a wonderful job.

  • 10 years ago

    by Bryan

    This is a good poem joe, i love the ending, 5/5!!!

  • 10 years ago

    by Kayla

    Awww! that is such a sweet poem. it's beautiful! nice work! Flow needs some work but not much. Imagery and word-choice was good also. 4/5

  • 10 years ago

    by Katie

    I love this poem its soo insipiring

    i love all your poems!! they are great!

  • 10 years ago

    by isabel

    Absolutely beautiful... very emotional...
    loved it...
    5/5

    *isabel*

  • 10 years ago

    by Pete

    Wow mate, the more i read the more i love your work. The emotion expressed here is amazing, the imagery works brilliantly with it. Overall very well written piece.
    Last stanza is by far the best for me.
    5/5
    Keep it up!

  • 10 years ago

    by Ingrid de Klerck

    Very beautiful poem indeed. I cannot point out the stanza I love best, they are all great!

    Best wishes,

    5/5 Ingrid

  • 10 years ago

    by gack60

    From reading this u can see that u write from the heart and not the head, its much easier for a poem to flow if it comes from within rather than making it up in ur head.
    I love the feeling it portrays even tho it has no rhyming structure.

    excellent work again

    5/5

  • 10 years ago

    by Melpomene

    This poem really warmed my heart. Such a sweetly expressed poem which I felt as though you put all your heart into it to write. The flow again was beautiful you have a way with writing poems where the words just come together to create something so simply beautiful. What more can I say then I truely enjoyed reading this poem. Well done on writing a gorgeous love poem which held so much meaning within every line. Talented I must say. ~Mel

  • 10 years ago

    by browneyezz

    That was amazing, great job