Comments : If you were...

  • 11 years ago

    by Mizz Kayla

    Your an [[Amazing]] writter.
    Your thoughts && feelings catch my eye.
    && I think its wonderful.
    Who ever these are about or are to
    They are very lucky to have someone like you.
    I love what you do.

  • 11 years ago

    by Tess

    Aww! Omgosh. That made me cry. I dont normally cry when it comes to your lovey dovey sweet mushy poems but OMGOSH! *hides face* So not teary eyed ;) Wow!!! Well keep it up!!!

  • 11 years ago

    by dora

    This was also beautiful. great use of words in this one. beautifully written. xx

  • 11 years ago


    I like this poem

  • 11 years ago

    by reality

    That was soo sweet...

  • 11 years ago

    by End Of Eternity

    Feelings that have been very nicely potrayed...great write indeed

    all the best and take care

  • 11 years ago

    by ~SaD-T3aRs~

    I really like this poems your really good...

  • 11 years ago

    by lovin a man behind bars

    That is a really good poem

  • 11 years ago

    by Mommy And Me

    Omg.. thats such an adorible poem.. so deep with meaning.. great work :)

  • 11 years ago

    by jaime

    Your poem is great

  • 11 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    I enjoyed this, it was as always, very sweet.
    I thought the flow was off in just a couple of places but apart from that, you did a wonderful job.

  • 11 years ago

    by Bryan

    This is a good poem joe, i love the ending, 5/5!!!

  • 11 years ago

    by Kayla

    Awww! that is such a sweet poem. it's beautiful! nice work! Flow needs some work but not much. Imagery and word-choice was good also. 4/5

  • 11 years ago

    by Katie

    I love this poem its soo insipiring

    i love all your poems!! they are great!

  • 11 years ago

    by isabel

    Absolutely beautiful... very emotional...
    loved it...


  • 10 years ago

    by Pete

    Wow mate, the more i read the more i love your work. The emotion expressed here is amazing, the imagery works brilliantly with it. Overall very well written piece.
    Last stanza is by far the best for me.
    Keep it up!

  • 10 years ago

    by Ingrid de Klerck

    Very beautiful poem indeed. I cannot point out the stanza I love best, they are all great!

    Best wishes,

    5/5 Ingrid

  • 10 years ago

    by gack60

    From reading this u can see that u write from the heart and not the head, its much easier for a poem to flow if it comes from within rather than making it up in ur head.
    I love the feeling it portrays even tho it has no rhyming structure.

    excellent work again


  • 10 years ago

    by Melpomene

    This poem really warmed my heart. Such a sweetly expressed poem which I felt as though you put all your heart into it to write. The flow again was beautiful you have a way with writing poems where the words just come together to create something so simply beautiful. What more can I say then I truely enjoyed reading this poem. Well done on writing a gorgeous love poem which held so much meaning within every line. Talented I must say. ~Mel

  • 10 years ago

    by browneyezz

    That was amazing, great job