Union of Souls

by Misstress   Nov 7, 2006

By the moon dappled water
her smile
illuminates a garden.
Circling warmth
as it traces
the lines which are about
to intertwine.

As the bells warbles
pensive notes,
a melody uncoiling
with every beat of my heart,
every step she makes,
closer now
to where I stand,

As cold breeze
stirred the bland air,
her brown hair breathes life,
tangled with
soft Lilac petals
her skin glistened,
through the pathway,
the altar and into
my heart.

as I reach for her hand,
the creaking sound
of a new door opening,
together now,
our first step we make,
closer now
to evermore.


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  • 11 years ago

    by Marc Ortiz

    Omg. that was really good! great imagery created in this poem! well done the choice of words was superb! flow was good! anyway keep writing good job on this one! :) 5/5!

  • 11 years ago

    by Boy

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  • 12 years ago

    by Sweet lig

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  • 12 years ago

    by Gary Jurechka

    This is beautifully expressed.It touches all the senses and has such meaninhg-a great write.

    Peace, Poetry, & Power,

    Gary Jurechka

  • 12 years ago

    by Letty

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