by Misstress   Apr 27, 2007

Twilight dip,
the aged pine
held its breath.
emblazoned in rainbow
unfolding wings
take a sip
from awakened songs
that hangs pendant on air,
the sapling of light
far into horizons.
Ah! Today
I take a breath
with the lilies.


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  • 10 years ago

    by Letty

    This is amazingly beautiful! I loved the imagery that you created here. Of course you know that I have always considered you to be magnificent; so I need not repeat myself. Keep up the great work friend. I have missed your work.


  • 11 years ago

    by Hebe

    Great poem.
    Great imagery.
    An enjoyable read.
    Take care

  • 11 years ago

    by Gary Jurechka

    This is a beautiful nature poem. I like the style and images you've used. The last three lines are especially powerful.

    Peace, Poetry & Power,

    Gary Jurechka

  • 11 years ago

    by Simply Josh

    And ganda ng poem n ito ha. This gave me a sense of freedom within. Thanks for a great read.
    cheers, josh

  • 11 years ago

    by Sweet lig

    Oh its such a very inspiring poet... eto tama ka inlove ata kabs mo kw msta n? its been a long time ha!