That was most delicious to read.

Amazing. Simply amazing. I loved that one line: I am uninspired by inspiration. This was a lovely little poem and I spyed no flaws. I would give constructive critisism, but I'm not in the mood right now. Sorry... :[
5/5, however.

Very good choice of words in this free flowing profound poem I really injoyed reading it

My god I love this. The vocabulary is the most amazing I have ever seen. Though, the downfall, most probably don't understand it.
This is amazing... the word choice, the flow, everything about it is flawless. Simply wonderful. Great job.

xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

Oh, the brutal swiftness of the tempest!
For with all it's warranted viciousness
it becomes the judgment of an impious decadence.

love that stanza right now...that probably spoke to me the most out of the entire poem...those first lines are what got me to read the rest. Definitely very good. i don't normally read or enjoy stuff that doesn't rhyme alot, but I liked this one...beautiful imagery and language. Keep it up

Tripp

Great owrk, very nicely written. 5/5

Okay, this poem made almost no sense to me. Almost. I did like the bits that did, though.

Somewhere on the lips of the threadbare horizon, your smile became my essence.
Beautifully expressed. 5/5.

I am not the embodiment of a drunkard's ambiguity.
Interesting line. All in all, good stuff.
Matt

Well I have my work cut out for me to write a reply but I can say that it will be an honor to write a return to something as beautiful as this very well done. 5/5

Ultimate selection of words and a very unique way of expressing darkness...loved the experience of going thro

all the best and take care

Well penned you potray here, though simply but unique yet creative written, "Should there ever come to pass a strong summer wind?"

i'll enjoyed my read here, keep them coming, have a great day!

This was reallly good hun. The flow was great, the descripitons and vocabulary were amazing and the emotion strong. 5/5

Holy crap. I have NEVER seen a poem like this before. And even though i dont know what im talking about. it was brilliant. I loved your use of vocabulary. And your theme of this was amazing. Great job sweetie!

I really liked the language and the style of this poem, it was definitely something different. Contents were great, lots of imagery and details. Dark in it's own way. Very nicely done.

It is very very deep

There is no word to describe how that poem is because its so great and it just like is amazing wow im in awe ur really good keep up the good work!!

Awesome poem i enjoyed it thrououghly.

That was great...i love to read poems like this...5/5

Love it need i say more?

Very deep and emotional poem. I personaly thought it was amazing. Your vocabulary was so strongly used that to me it don't matter if you get it or not it's a good poem. Lol. Well I really liked it. 5/5 God Bless.

Taylor*

Fabulicious, lovee .
I don`t know what more I need to say .
Very well done .
..ღ__MiNDYY