I Won't Close My Eyes

by Shae   Dec 3, 2006


I'd do anything to be with you,
anything to hold you forever.
You've done so much for me,
but I just can't tell you how I feel.
I won't ever give up on 'us',
just tell me when your ready.
I know I haven't met you,
But I love you,
and don't know how to say it.
But for now, I won't close my eyes.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Kristina

    Is this about internet love or something? if so i can relate to it.
    it's a very short poem, but it has emotion in it which makes it great! 5/5

    ~Kristina

  • 17 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    This was beautiful!!
    The imagery and wording were breathtaking, and it flowed very well.
    You did a great job on this.

  • 17 years ago

    by ashley

    Wow another good one 5/5 keep it up by the way i live really close to ilinois i live in indiana just checked out ur profile im sorry about ur dad i was in the same situation once...

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