I'm Sorry

by Shae   Jan 7, 2007


Couldn't you of just waited a few minutes?
I guess you're in a hurry to die.
Take a few minutes,
relax, and enjoy life the way it is.
I'm your daughter,
but I'm not so happy to say.
Just because I'm trying my best not to be like you,
It seems like you are holding a grudge against me.
I'm sorry I'm not perfect.
I just can't be,
It is impossible.
I pray I don't loose mom too,
but it seems like its going that way.
I'm sitting here waiting,
I'm sitting here dying.
Waiting for a normal life...
But will I have to wait forever?

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  • 17 years ago

    by omen

    Well done, it seems alittle forced in places and in others it just dosn't seem to flow all that well, but over all a great poem, 4/5
    omen

  • 17 years ago

    by David

    Major sad poem shae. this is very clever how you wrote it tho. i loved the uniqueness about it!

    5/5 david

  • 17 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    This was so very sad...but such a pleasure to read.
    The emotion and depth in this piece are clear to see for anyone who reads it.
    Excellent work on this.

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