This was a great poem, it really hit home b/c i'm one of those girls that you would make fun of, top of her class, all honors, not blonde but i am pretty skinny and muscular at the same time... lets just say, i'm not as shallow as the other girls, but i do have a lot going for me... great write, it was so true! 5/5
Wow.. you're message is very strong and clear in this and leaves a huge impact. You have definitely captured the world as it is today. I really liked the last stanza.. it seemed to sum up the poem nicely. Great job on this! 5/5
I have a connfession to make...
im one of thise cheerleaders that chase you and i give mediocore guys the boot. waaa. that was inspiring. i should give all ppl a chance. i nvr rlly thought of it that way. great job.
Our highschool worked a lot different than most highschool. We were the best school in athletics, but everyone got along well. We had nerds on the football team and basketball team. They were well respected and no one really made fun of anyone. Everything was mixed so well, and it was only the outsiders that caused the trouble.
It really only takes one person to stand up and change, before others follow, but the thing is. Most people are afraid to be different. But the truth is, I'd rather be different than the same as most people.
Good poem man, makes me think back.. You're not quite the jerk you make yourself out to be. At least you've realized your mistakes.
This is definately one of my favorite poems on this website. It is so true and the way you wrote about it gave me such a clue as to what some guys think of it. Thank you for writing this poem. You are an amazing poet, keep up the awesome work. 5/5